Comments of chapter undefined of Original Hybrid - Teen Wolf Fan Fiction

The MC is not deserving of Nicklaus power if he is so weak

MC weak and crap, man I loved this story, but for me it was already, seriously an original catching up ?, Even not being old enough to be as op as Klaus, he is at least twice as strong as the alpha wolves and the Vampires , and the MC picked up a fucking vampire? Fuck that, it gave me a bad taste in the mouth ..... If the MC was Op would be the best story I've ever seen, but he's so pathetic and weak that I gave up on reading ..... And it's still the kind of MC that does not kill anyone, he's very merciful ....

Dude just F@&$ mc put on your op pants he’s the alpha hybrid for f sake!!!!!!!

yeah totally bull**** and predictable the mc rival is soooooo forced and as i already said since he got Vampire original power he can compel other Vampires ron totally no Problem and yeah as eyesofttruth said mc way to weak all seems just way to forced you should have at least killed ron Right there and now and not such bull**** like that. Let me guess you want to let ron build now his own Vampire empire with his "queen" and be mc rival… well just predictable and bull****

Sorry but this was an extremely idiotic chapter. The mc is supposed to be an op hybrid for gods sake! Wolves bane doesn’t even work on him, and he should definitely be stronger than some damn street vampire he created!

Mc is so weak

The mc is too weak considering hes a hybrid id expect him to be way stronger than this. Heck it looks like peter and him were equally powerfull heck mc seemed even weaker than him. I can see that u have an idea of what u want to do with the story but how this plot twist was executed was horrible. This ch made mc seem weak and someones whose afraid to kill... well im rambling now but u get the idea

Don't care about the reasons he made ron a vampire, it's already ****ty and dumb move from the start. Like wtf making vampires like that without thinking the consequences especially when he can't control it. And he's seriously weak aa hell! He a fucking hybrid and cant even do **** to a vampire he made for not even over amonth? I like the story and concept so I'm still reading this despite my rants. Will stay for few more chapters but if this still continue to be like this I think I'm out after that. I like the ones with a good character development so kinda hope there's still hope for this one. Just want him to be not a pussy, want him to be ruthless enough to kill or annihilate those who wants to harm him/ his pack. Like the argents code, hunt those who hunt him.

Idiot mc. Trust a random stranger to become a vampire and tells his secret just to let him betray him. Idiot!

Doesn't matter. You pick someone off the street and gave them power. He should have think before he made a potential life time enemy.

what you should do in season 2? erase that stupid mistake and kill kate and ron as soon as possible

Wow what a fucking stupid author why did you fucking make him a hybrid if you were going to give him so many weakness of both vampire and werewolf like wtf his vampire that's not even a week year old managed to **** him over like wtf lol idiot author .

Your honestly doing a very bad job with Power levels. This chapter was very disappointing and forced. I mean literally all you had to do was compel him and kill him or let’s not forget how fast max should be at his transformation. He shouldn’t have even been able to react. I like the story but it’s not going in the right direction. If you’re trying so hard to lower his strength then you shouldn’t have written a story about an OP character.

why is he so weak and why did he even sire that retard wtf he knew he wasn't a good person

Ffs, that forced plot ruined the novel for me. We all knew something was wrong when he made Ron a vampire. There was no reason at all for him to make Ron a vampire Fyck you author

I'm so disappointed, so much for strongest alpha. Defeated by a freaking shotgun of wolf vane? What about his vampire side? He should have been able to decapitate Ron easily

Well you want to put some dramas but you totally failed, hahaha Im out

I think you should focus more on the MC powers. Show us what he can do. Don't make him into some weak character, make him behave like a hybrid. And you might add a true villain so that the MC can grow stronger without worry. Also don't be discouraged by bad comments.

Dude, seriously you let kate live? and more importantly, you let her become an f* vampire????????

I love this serie but im starting to get really pissed off, is our mc a fucking beta and a normal vampire hybrid with nerfed power? it vouldent mather if he is in Wolf form or vampire form he should be twice if not more stronger then everyone els yet his sired looser vampire manadge to sneak up on the alpha and one shot him? When max is an original hybrid and he can barly put a scratch on him .... Make sense author