Comments of chapter undefined of Spending My Retirement In A Game
Spending My Retirement In A Game
DiceVR
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I just realized the implementation of transmutation could reduce the material wastage percent to 0. Not enough leather? Put some scraps of the same kind together with transmutation and they’re not perfect but darn near as good as their original pelts. Not enough wood? Invent pressboard with sawdust. Metal already has this capability which is shown by forging ingots and removing impurities. It’d be super great for paper, you could create magic paper that can undo what you written stoke by stroke! Just like a drawing software! I know I could use this!
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You know what's stupid? That you act like automatons need to drink oil as food. And they don't. Maybe horse still need some because it's running all day, but wolf doesn't at all. It simply not moving. What more stupid? That they don't need any food that is! Because they do! They need energy! In your novel, any golem after activation can work endlessly. But where they taking energy from? Ah? And people say you don't write fillers. Oh, it course not. Because you waste half of the chapter on crafting process, describing it as close as possible, where no one can actually follow what's going on because of all the details. It's so freaking boring! And you even repeat the same things, and write first characters thoughts, then making them say it, and than making them repeat it to others! And that beside complete nonsense like making bee nod or saying it looks partially human. What? They not even can! If you going to make all his monsters into hot girls, it just prove that although style may has changed, you still writing the same trash that prologue was!
