Comments of chapter undefined of She transmigrated and started different life

the first chapter and I am already 😭

I'm crying so much right now, that my mom is asking what's wrong😂😅

Omg 😭 that wa a such emotional chapter. Perfect masterpiece

“whatever she read she would remember immediately” sana OIL

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My eyes are sweating. ....yes sweating! !!

Thanks for the chapter 😘

I love how this story starts!!!!😁😁😁💓💓💓

Why start a story with death???? tragic but seemingly the story has ended... hmmmmmmmm!

This whole chapter can be a short story on itself.

It's still the first chapter, and I've already felt so many emotions !! I cried a lot !! it is quite interesting, I will continue to follow

You have one small mistake and one somewhat important mistake. The small one is using "taught" instead of "thought". The other mistake is the scene where the nurse finds out she died. If the nurse knows she is dead, why does she call the ambulance? It might be better to say that she started crying in the middle of calling the ambulance or after calling. However, your English is better than several of the translations on webnovel, and I already love your first chapter. Good luck with writing!

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