Comments of chapter undefined of The Birth of a Monster (The First Vampire I)

The Birth of a Monster (The First Vampire I)

Jelim

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HeavenShakingPalm9Lv5HeavenShakingPalm9

Digs: "Wait, you're scared?" Me: "Yeah man, I'm terrified. You go, I need to check on Jane" *walks away, avoiding future trouble because of events that happen on cave. Therefore reducing the chances of being tossed out of village if there's a chance, leaving Digs to deal with that crap instead*

5yr

Nkechi_Onyia_5550Lv1Nkechi_Onyia_5550

point of correction, giving any body vampire powers never ends well

Jelim:While it would avoid trouble, I also feel that alternate storyline would be rather boring. Cause Diggory as a child is an ass, so giving him Vampire powers wouldn't end well...

3yr

DositheeLv5Dosithee

Damn that was superbly written

4yr

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alucardtfsLv14alucardtfs

thats so interresting ngl

3yr

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BoneMarrowLv15BoneMarrow

not gonna lie, i got a sadistic kick out of this chapter

3yr

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Vreed_Was_HereLv12Vreed_Was_Here

Well pray came straight to the monster. He should of not listened to a spoiled brat dare.

3yr

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XanfilledLv1Xanfilled

This is interesting!

3yr

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Mr_ShangLv13Mr_Shang

𝕿𝖍𝖆𝖓𝖐 𝖞𝖔𝖚 4 𝖙𝖍𝖊 𝖈𝖍𝖆𝖕.

5yr

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XentrujoLv15Xentrujo

Who doesn't love a laugh from a deep dark cave that mysteriously appears?🤣

3yr

Lalando99Lv5Lalando99

Xpxp

3yr

SenkuuLv4Senkuu

Sh*t this isss Soo dope!!?

3yr

I_am_TitanLv5I_am_Titan

Thx f/ chap

4yr

Sage_HiddenBearLv6Sage_HiddenBear

Very nicely done.

4yr

AvidReader962Lv14AvidReader962

Great chapter

4yr

hiddenwolfLv5hiddenwolf

Ty

5yr

MazniBanichkiLv14MazniBanichki

Thanks for the chapter.

5yr

PhantomNite629Lv15PhantomNite629

Thx for the chap

5yr