Comments of chapter undefined of Fire Mage

Oh Jessie, you sweet child... I’m proud of your rationality. I hope that you will find something to lighten the guilt of murder. qnq

idk how to feel about this chapter. it was not about MC but rather well written and adds character development. On the other hand, I as a reader feel very little about kids as they are not fully sketched out. 🤔 if you had sketched them out then I would have shouted fillers lol. Why not release 1 extra chapter once a week .dedicated to side characters

mourning the loss of Jessie's innocence.

Thx 👍👍

exp

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Thanks for the chapter