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Comments of chapter undefined of Stand By Me Darling

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Najad_Sahari
Najad_SahariLv14Najad_Sahari

Hi Author Golda. I'm back here and realised the Red hair and green eyes are with Artie whereas in Obsession of the CEO they are Rory's 😍. I'm prepared with enough coins now to purchase the novel .

Golda
GoldaAuthorGolda

Happy readingđŸ„°

Najad_Sahari:Ah Yes. Blue eyes...And it's great to be back. I've to abstain from using my monthly subscription to accumulate and by the time I'm through with the free chapters, my next subs will give me enough . I saw my initial comments - it has been a year😉

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Liza_swan
Liza_swanLv13Liza_swan

An amazing beginning. The girl seems to be more stressed than a normal child would, stressed about doing the right thing, being polite and following rules. Interesting beginning with a lot to be revealed.

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scarlettben
scarlettbenLv13scarlettben

Amazing depiction of two kids who were force fed their ideals and hatred for the other family meeting and finding out that the adults might be wrong. Hope these two grow up and end the feud between the families. And a lot of questions from the synopsis and the prologue. How did the sweet, innocent girl, who liked to follow rules from the prologue turned to that don't care for anything woman in the future. Can't wait for more chapters, author. As usual, you rock!

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LoveWithinRange
LoveWithinRangeLv10LoveWithinRange

It reminds me of Romeo and Juliet. Their differences were represented by colours, blue and red. It is so cool that red and blue are the representation of the heart, blue makes up the deoxygenated blood? And red makes up the oxygenated blood, and together they are whole.

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patitolucas74
patitolucas74Lv15patitolucas74

Beautiful beginning but gave me the chills ... what is coming ??? does this novel has a love triangle?? hope not đŸ€ž

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CharlatanKlein
CharlatanKleinLv4CharlatanKlein

OMG!! TALIA! That name... Author did you not notice that sometimes you mistook Jerlina's name to Talia? I think I read it typo'ed two times. I was like (who the heck is Talia???), I continued reading then I realized it was just Jerlina. It made me wonder if that was another one of her nicknames. And the truth has revealed himself!!! Talia is actually from a different book 😂. Talia r u lost ? I should've marked it earlier so I could mention it when need help pointing out where to edit...

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sylwa97
sylwa97Lv4sylwa97

Intriguing

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bleedingpapers
bleedingpapersLv4bleedingpapers

Loving how you introduced your story, gives us the best impressions!

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Najad_Sahari
Najad_SahariLv14Najad_Sahari

Such a beautifully written prologue.

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kimberly_Bissoon
kimberly_BissoonLv4kimberly_Bissoon

♄

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Symt
SymtLv14Symt

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

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CharlatanKlein
CharlatanKleinLv4CharlatanKlein

They're adorable! hnggg- Blue ! Red !

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soneun
soneunLv6soneun

Golda! Congratulations! I really love it ❀❀❀❀❀

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mahu1
mahu1Lv6mahu1

So excited for the story

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Rachael_232
Rachael_232Lv10Rachael_232

Interesting

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Janetjyothi
JanetjyothiLv12Janetjyothi

Nice

Golda
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cessd2
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See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Ngozi_Maryann
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