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Comments of chapter undefined of Doomsday Pillars

OneForAll
OneForAllLv2OneForAll

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DaoistMahesvara
DaoistMahesvaraLv6DaoistMahesvara

My country fellow, I support your novel bro

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Hitexh
HitexhLv10Hitexh

Just knowing its from indonesia, a minus to overall story.. but a boon for the branding with modern name of the family.. lets be real, if the MC name is Pak Anton, or Doni, no one will expect much from this..

Sage_HiddenBear
Sage_HiddenBearLv6Sage_HiddenBear

I dont mind whete ots located or their names, i mind the plot, the grammar and the setting. These are most important to a reader, not whether its amaerican or not. K find that rather silly. What if its not of earth at all will he not read the story? Perhaps its a fantasy world or a scifi world with no relationship to our current world, will he then ignore it? Pointless.

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ThousandChaos
ThousandChaosLv6ThousandChaos

finally, Indonesian novel.. good job mamen !

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Avan
AvanAuthorAvan

Edited by Goggoat thnx bros

auleotamarin
auleotamarinLv11auleotamarin

Dont care where its from. If its good enough ill read it.

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Indra1234
Indra1234Lv11Indra1234

Cintailah produk Indonesia!!! (salah satunya novel ini)

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Roni_Sanjaya
Roni_SanjayaLv5Roni_Sanjaya

Karna gue orang indonesia, gue ngedukung karya anak bangda 😁

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zeypher
zeypherLv14zeypher

Indonesia is a damn good choice. The islands also give him security and time to build up once doomsday hits. The islands also allow the author to gradually pace up the story. Indonesia is this regards is a brilliant idea. Alex is also a architectural firm worker so reasons that t will be easy for him to get access to supplies in this prep time and that when **** hits the fan he can do adept level base building.

ImaginationGalaxy
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Chunami
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bewang
bewangLv3bewang

Idrc about the country it is about cuz i can atleast learn something knew but i understand where people that are complaining are coming from, they want a mainstream city or country so they can visualize it when reading, but they can just go look for pictures of the city :v

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sompretkije
sompretkijeLv3sompretkije

Mantap mas novelnya , lanjutkan

B4kwan_
B4kwan_Lv4B4kwan_

Wow....... 👍 Keren bro...... Cm nama2 char kurang "indonesia" Hehehe terus maju mas bro... ╰(*´︶`*)╯

DragonReignX3
DragonReignX3Lv5DragonReignX3

Mistakes include but not limited to: unneeded transfers Present-->Past tense. Missed Present-->Future tense. Missed fullstops. Sentence starting without a capital letter. Awkward wordings and other minor mistakes. 💂

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Triple_x
Triple_xLv10Triple_x

At first I wanted to stop reading because MC already has a wife + children, but after knowing MC's location was in Indonesia, I continued because it was not easy to find stories with good Indonesian location settings.(dan ini lebih mudah membayankan apa yang terjadi wkwk)

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Jay_8793
Jay_8793Lv11Jay_8793

I want to revisit Bali so much. Love that island and culture. Good luck with this book, ill be reading all the way!

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Tigadua
TigaduaLv3Tigadua

👍👍👍 great

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stuffls3
stuffls3Lv5stuffls3

rent a boat large enough for family and supplies, stay out to sea for the next 130 days. avoid the plague and the walking dead. sail to Bali when the pillars land.