Legion20
I love legions writing but the problem here is that i never doubted for a single second that Jirni was playing him. because as great a character as she is, she is almost TOO good. i never expect her to be anything but perfectly prepared for any occasion. thats why i loved the divorce plotline. Her families emotions are the only thing that can trip her up. but there is zero suspense if you want me to believe she could be led into a trap, especially after the constant foreshadowing that she was his next target. The worst part is im actually wondering how Meln will escape alive! Anything he manages will just seem contrived since he’s escaped death so many times now. and Lith HAS to be the one to kill him so he IS going to escape
I read chapter like this like i read batman comics or other superheroes with crazy paranoia and preparedness. As waiting for them them to have the i fooled you or you actually entered my trap moment and that’s where the suspense comes for me from waiting for the moment jinri takes back the upper hand and has control over the situation again or shows that she has been controlling the situation the whole time