Comments of chapter undefined of Supreme Magus
Supreme Magus
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i hate that authors force a villain everytime when they cant write something that make sense, since he is a kid author decided to make a villan out of his big brother. everyone act badly towards his big brother and he is actualy right with things he said (they shoudnt have made another baby while already had 4 and one of them been sick and need costant medical care plusthe mc definitly a leech, he is just an evil sprit that possesed the dead baby, and he pretent to be a genious while been an avarage person just using his past experience and his parent insist on taking care of his sister which is not geting any better while paying medical care for her and as he said when their parents die she will be a burden to her sibling, instead of understanding boys frustration and telling him in a nice way that they are a family etc. show him love and care , make him get along with his family they decide to beat him which is a small kid to the point of making him unable to walk for days) i bet he will also make it so that his brother even more of a villain and he will kill him becoming an hero for his family (someone who possesed a baby and killing the son of the parents actualy kid) and cure her sister with magic. i should have guess this is been a bad unoriginal novel from ass breathing meditation and core in his body and learning magic while been a baby just from been there when it cast, or from author forcing the car driver from acciant of his brother to act spoiled after got free and somehow with impossible odd coming across him while outside.
Here's a big problem about the personality of the brother. Personalities and emotions does not develop that way, the way you did it is too forced. They grew up in the same house, grew the same way, have the same loving parents, etc. So why did his personality turn that way? Care to explain? The spanking part is not counted.
#1. MC is a false genius. A wolf in sheeps clothing. Because if he was a genius, he should of been a genius in his past life. But nope. He was ordinary person. It's literally comparing a grown adults intellect, who has a masters degree, to a little kid not even in 1st grades Intellect. And the mc is ok with that? Not very appealing. #2. Older brother is not a villain. He's just a kid, in body and mind. Kids say things all the time when they are angry but don't mean it. Beating a kid until they can't walk for days is worse than anything the MC's past dad had ever done to the mc. Surprised mc didn't have flash back to the days his past dad was beating him and his younger brother and start tripping out. Guess as long as it moves the plot forward or if he doesn't like that person, even if it's his own siblings, it doesn't matter to him? Or his animosity towards his past dad isn't all that big of a deal? And only uses it as an excuse or to justify himself when it's convenient for him or the plot? #3. If starvation is really that big of deal then the mc should be more understanding of how his older bro feels, considering his bro is older so has been feeling the hunger longer than him. #4. Why is the mc so much more attached to the females in his new family than his bro's? Considering the person closest to him in his past life was his bro... and at least he had some interactions with his father even tho he hated him... He had nothing with his mother. And he had no sisters. Guess the whole 'my younger bro has a great relationships with girls and with his gf, they were going to get married so I'm jealous' is still bugging him. Cause it seems he is only trying to get close to females. #5. So from what I've I've gather so far, the mc a spiteful, petty and narrow minded fully grown ***** in a kids body?? Whos holding a grudge agaisnt a little kid in a little kids body??? Why am i rooting for this guy???? I'm actually rooting for the older brother. Lol.
For everybody complaining about some science ****, this is a F*cking fantasy world, sure there are some connections that the author tried to do with magic and science but not everything is specified. Also, please remember that this is a goddamn novel and not everything can be covered, so if you want to read REAL science then go read a textbook or something, goddamn.
I don’t understand most of the critique here^^ He’s not a 3-year old. When dying he was older than his parents and quite a cynical personality. Yes, blowing his cover and all, but how often in our times are people telling most intimate things to complete strangers as if they were cofessing on the death bed? Even without a good reason to do so! The mc is just not stable yet and yes, hunger makes You crazy. I have to say, this story is not perfect, but shows one of the most realistic and sound openings. Btw, I dropped a lot of stories because of exactly this reason and cannot c that happening for this one yet.
