Demonification
Demons and devils are not the same. I don't want to be lumped together with those treacherous bastards.
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You called me?
Is this gonna be 15 chapters long too?
Carne asafa... i mean asada
bro fumbled
The ATGverse has an Earth in it.
alright, if i ever receive one of those surveys, im putting all my info in. even if they ask for my bank account...
Again, why is this guy the mc?
Why is this is guy the mc?
Typical rust players
Be confident and put three more 9
Sure…
Boys over flowers
It’s because in the previous timeline, you were not the mc yet.
Fine. You’re right. Making an early review is a lil ridiculous. I had to stop reading at ch 13 because I was too frustrated with your mc. Your MC is like a beta jp mc who doesn’t know how to take advantage of others. I would understand if it was a world like earth but ATG? The rule there is the rule of the jungle. Any advantage you have, keep it to yourself and your close ones. Why let others know that you can open profound entrances when even yun che doesn’t advertise that he knows it, except for his own people.
Well, what can I say. This is your novel and your world. If you want the sacred ground and the empire to be good guys and backing ur mc, you could do that. But in the real ATG verse, the Phoenix Empire is full of greedy b*stards with the exception of the princess.
For me, control is a greater word. Instead of trying to manipulate it to follow your commands, just control it directly. No need for any manipulation.
Writing quality is good except for a few wrong grammar and spelling. Idk anything about the updates Story development is like slice of life a little too slow to my liking Hated the MC's naive way of thinking and showing all of his secrets except for the system. Imagine not leaving a trump card for yourself and just bare it all for others to see World background is just ATG
why do i hate this mc so much?