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Comments of chapter undefined of Journey Towards Greatness

SAIRAVIKIRANB
SAIRAVIKIRANBLv2SAIRAVIKIRANB

It is nice but should have avoided AI system. Since they will give u poke dex right. And about Ash age it

SAIRAVIKIRANB
SAIRAVIKIRANBLv2SAIRAVIKIRANB

😂😂😂

Ironlotuce
IronlotuceLv13Ironlotuce

funniest reason i have heard on why ash doesn't age. XD

Sniper1non
Sniper1nonLv15Sniper1non

So Ash at "10 years old" is 100 years old to us.

Oniichan_Thickskin
Oniichan_ThickskinLv13Oniichan_Thickskin

So that’s Ash secret to immortality... and Pokémon is a cartoon!!! FITE MEH!!!!

Xellion
XellionLv5Xellion

Well I'm new here because I sudden urge to read Pokemon theme novel... But I got 2 question... 1 - Do you need to have 9 inches little brother? Pokemon World is kinda children friendly... only holding hands and kiss on the cheek except for Serena... I think... 2 - Did "God" just explained how the hell Ash having difficulty growing up for many seasons... heck sometimes 1 episode takes 3-5 days or even month to end one episode...

EddyZ
EddyZLv14EddyZ

1 year = 10 years

WhatisLife
WhatisLifeLv2WhatisLife

just sad that nobody is mentioning how badly this chapter is written .even kids can write better. even i would be ashamed to post this kind of abomination. julian "..... bla bla shit" god ".... bla bla shit" what a lousy writing.

YooSu
YooSuLv5YooSu

WhyTF would God give him a second life with three wishes when he's happy? I'm curious of what would happen if God was furious or sad xd

kooG
kooGLv5kooG

Eww chimchar. Might as well choose torchic or charmander at least they can mega evolve

Aman_Gupta_1277
Aman_Gupta_1277Lv1Aman_Gupta_1277

Author you might as well have chosen some random guy instead of old war solider, cause you currently don't have skills to write how someone like him thinks. (No Offence)

sholo_bolo
sholo_boloLv3sholo_bolo

Doesn't he not know Chimchar isn't a Pokemon from Kanto and also blaze is an ability only Ash's one has. Charmander would've been better. It can mega evolve and you wouldn't need to look for a flying pokemon.

Gamer_Boy_2840
Gamer_Boy_2840Lv4Gamer_Boy_2840

Biggest waste of 3 wishes ever...dropped

Andrew_Edwards_0410
Andrew_Edwards_0410Lv13Andrew_Edwards_0410

the run on sentences/paragraphs and lack of punctuation is kind of annoying but if the novel is as good as the reviews say it'll be easily overlooked. I'm looking forward to it

skulputulurubug
skulputulurubugLv13skulputulurubug

You spend 10 years worth of time in diapers if you were reborn

YOLO36
YOLO36Lv13YOLO36

I skipped most of this to keep the storys mc past vague. A month ago I saw his real age which I have forgotten now. All I got to say is that is their really anyone that can relate to it. Who starts a story with that just how old do u think the majority of the readers are.

V_A_S_C_O
V_A_S_C_OLv1V_A_S_C_O

Llegue tarde xd Jajajajaja, me alegraste el dĂ­a con la parte del pequeĂąo amigo de 9 pulgadas.

Dexe
DexeLv12Dexe

Wait a minute. He chose to be 18. With the way time works, would he end up looking like a 2 years old?

RaKo
RaKoLv3RaKo

Gracias por el capítulo ❤️❤️

Heri_Tatu_6381
Heri_Tatu_6381Lv1Heri_Tatu_6381

Yuuki_Kyouya
Yuuki_KyouyaLv2Yuuki_Kyouya

How an oldman know about stuff system!

Zend
ZendLv4Zend

Pokemon = my childhood