Comments of chapter undefined of Reborn as Godzilla in Another World
Reborn as Godzilla in Another World
TheFriendlyWeeb
Chapter comments83
The story is still good, but honestly the previous one was way better. Also there are too many loopholes because you removed the system. How and why does he level up without a system, how will he reach his previous state without a system and how will he get the previous things that he had without a system. Most importantly you have to remove the little baby Godzilla that he summoned previously in the latest chapters. You ****ed up honestly.
You have removed too many important things, and added other useless things ... An intro before death longer than before ... then he dies, he does not know anything and it seems that he already knows everything about the system ... he does not ask himself anything ... there is no explanation of anything, then he starts to attack, not even a slight hesitation and starts to slaughter monsters, without wondering if they can be stronger than him... you started too fast this time
TheFriendlyWeeb honestly your doing a really good job ignore the comments that say the original story was better. I feel that this version goes a little more in-depth where as the last one you kinda painted yourself into a corner with no way out except forcing some events. Taking a step back like this is a great way to allow you to express how powerful gzilla is as well as go deeper with the relationships that are already their. For example the black dragon queen only was interested in his power and blood, wheres now you can develop a better relationship between all the entities you want to introduce and explain why this is happening, rather than, gzilla destroying a city, for no reason and getting no experience for it. good job so far keep up the good work
No one is wrong or right, we are all on different sides and different opinions and my opinion is that the Rewritten Novel is better than the previous, No long dialogue between Kira and the System so we focus more of the story then their conversation and Kira only shows the status and even an idiot would know how it would function, he could of ask the System in the background how it functions anyways, the skills and bloodlines shop would show up in later chapters and the snake monsters showing up and him fighting them, he could have been lucky that the snakes is a little weaker than him or there's an explanation to why he acted reckless is that he already knew the status or another explanation that the Author would explain why he Kira recklessly fought the ferocious beast's
