Comments of chapter undefined of Draga of the Vanguard
Draga of the Vanguard
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Advice: -if you are going to change the survivor count, change all mentions of it, it provides a point of dis-engagement as the world changes inexplicably outside of the notice of the reader. -The knights can be desperate, but if they take random kids off the street, they aren't knights, they are just soldiers. knights would recruit only adults and put through training Before travelling with them and getting into combat.
In the first chapter, the survivor is only one. But in this chapter, the survivor count became 23. Seems like the author change their mind. I like the eerie knight though "every penny counts" hahahaha. His character is straight forward and practical. The Mc though, "I WILL KILL ALL THE DRAGONS!!!" well.. good luck kiddo.
