Comments of chapter undefined of Monster Integration

"Ashlyn comes" "Come to Ashlyn" "Come Ashton" I've never once seen you even say this correctly. Are you just trying to put random words together and hope it makes sense? I bet he hasn't gotten an editor yet, because he doesn't understand what we've been saying. It can be either "Come here, Ashlyn," or, "Ashlyn, come." It could also be, "Ashlyn, come here." Yet you still fail at such ****** terms, and the last few paragraphs I could hardly make out, because of how outrageously horrifying it is!

The writing or English starts to get better at chapter 18. So, just hold on a bit. Then at chapter 33 or 34 he has started to has for help finding and editor. Then at about chapter 36 the editor starts editing and it is much better.

good story..keep it up...nice chap too

Good story, but you need to get an editor.

Thanks for the update really intresting story so far .

So far this story is a unique take on a fairly common trope. I am enjoying it and I can't wait to see where you take it. Cheers!

Are you planning on going back to revise any of the chapters?

Will this trend continue on the grammar part? It’s getting really annoying having to process that.

good story

great chapter but horrible grammar! please edit it !

how did this mess get a high rating? what is wrong with people desperate for novels!?

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muito interessante a história! estou esperando por mais capítulos!!!

Thx

Yay, next chapter is 18th. Fingers crossed

this is a book that somehow makes more sense if you are passing out from sleep deprevation. i have to skim over 3/4 of a paragraph to make sense of it.

it's like they've been fighting for three days.

Gracias - Thanks