Comments of chapter undefined of Monster Integration

The writing or English starts to get better at chapter 18. So, just hold on a bit. Then at chapter 33 or 34 he has started to has for help finding and editor. Then at about chapter 36 the editor starts editing and it is much better.

How is this promising? The chapters are short, and not even native English speakers can understand the horrible “editing”.

Promising...

Horrible 1st person writing and grammar. This is barely legible.

This chapter needs to be re-edited.

Are you paying the editor who edited this chapter and the last one? Because, honestly, you shouldn't. He did a terrible job.

The editor needs to be replaced. Too many mistakes

I cannot handle this any longer. It is just too painful to read.

Xp

Why is he getting jealous every time he sees a new monster? Is there some more benefits except a longer and healthier life to be had with the rank-ups? Thank you for the chapter and the treat! (^_^)/

Thanks

So getting harassed the first few chapters and. And knowing she’s a sparrow and a lot Of people got rank 6 or higher monsters, so he will probably get harrased and bullied. Maybe be called dumb for rejecting offers. But I’m Looking forward to when the sparrow is strong. Gray flame sounds amazing. And the grammar is also a bit wrong, “o” instead of to, some otheir Mistakes. Good worktho author. :)

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