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SSS_SsS1yrReplied to SSS_SsSCh 475 The Third God!- SSS_SsS1yrPosted
So far so good. Writing quality is good as always :). The update stability 😭, I mean. Yeah it slow, maybe like 4 chapters a week. The story development is still on progress, starting slow. Character design is also still in progress. World background is still in progress. Though I must say, I am quite sad that you have taken a break from your other novel. Keep it up tho:)
- SSS_SsS1yrCommentedCh 29 "Lost on the Train: A Journey into the Unknown"
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Overall it’s a pretty good novel, especially when you started writing 1 week ago. Although it’ not the best, it good potential. Wiritng mistakes is close to 0 Slow start but it starts picking up at chapter like 14 I think. Personally I think if you develop a good cultivation system with names and allat later in the novels it would be pretty good.
- SSS_SsS1yrCommentedCh 9 "Duel in the Dark: The Battle of the Blades"
- SSS_SsS2yrCommentedCh 140 Mystical Medicine I
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author instead of complaining all the time which is so annoying.. complaining about how slow he is. Why not focus on speed, he wants to get faster but doesn’t Focus on it. Author making him run around with a shield when hes lacking speed is VERY SMART yes
Ch 122 To The Marshland III - SSS_SsS2yrCommented
Li yi fei will he try to get her?
"Just remember one thing," I continued. "No matter how much other people harass and insult me, you cannot interfere. Do you understand?" This was for her protection. I don't want her to become a target as well. Even if she was in one of the 4 Great Families of Shenzhen, the Qing family was still weak compared to the other 3 families. Scum like Li Yi Fei won't be afraid of offending the Qing family. - SSS_SsS2yrCommentedCh 103 Reaching Destination!
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So he’s Getting carried
We are encountering monsters frequently today, we had already encountered 6 Corporal level monsters and 19 Specialist grade monsters already and its only afternoon. - SSS_SsS2yrCommented
Study runes, do the night blade technique I think it was
I read both of the encyclopedia few hours a day both to gain knowledge and to pass the time. - SSS_SsS2yrCommented
She’s A fire type and she can’t Hangle the heat? Even the mc can..
Sometime later, Ashlyn integrated into me due to the temperature being too hot. - SSS_SsS2yrCommented
Look at this author forgetting his own work smh.. he did say 80%
I understood everything after she explained in detail, looked like Blazing Strike have to wait for little more than expected to be used by me. - SSS_SsS2yrCommented
Bro stop complaining you did reject a tier 8/7 monster
If only this mutation had spread to her strain making it high level, at least to be at the lieutenant level that would have been great. - SSS_SsS2yrCommented
Not just a stupid mc but a stupid and spoiled bird
Ashlyn didn't want to eat that demanded that I cook food for her, getting angry I gave her choice 'either eat it or stay hungry we get out of the valley. - SSS_SsS2yrCommented
So earlier When he said he shouldn’t Cook food outside because it will attract Monstera.. BUT NOW HE WANTS TO BURN THE WHOLE CORPSE, NOT JUST A PIECE OF IT FOR FOOD BUT THE WHOLE CORPSE. HIS GOLDFISH BRAIN IS EVEN DUMBER THAN A GOLDFISH
I am such an idiot! I can't understand some common thing, "Deedee dig the hole and bury those bodies into it." said Rhea said to didi. - SSS_SsS2yrCommented
In the future I bet he will hide his powers and aura then act weak.
The sky had already turned half dark and we are hearing all sort of monster noises, if not for Rhea and DeeDee intentionally radiating corporal grade aura lots of monsters had already attacked us. - SSS_SsS2yrCommented
You do need help.. - He finds things out late / slow minded - Keep getting distracted When he said SEVERAL times that he won’t Get disctracted anymore - His brain is comparable To a goldfish’s brain. - Focus on thing you need, you train the speed technique for a reason so stop going All rounder/ Equal at all stats. Focus on speed because you need it, running with a shwild sounds stupid with a speed technique..
''No, I don't need help!" I said DeeDee had come closer to me and asked if she could help me beat this monster.