Comments of chapter undefined of The Prince Hidden in the Shadows- Fanfic
The Prince Hidden in the Shadows- Fanfic
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DEMONBEELv4DEMONBEE
hmm I wanted like a whole separate story of only arth, were there where only tiny hints of harry and his pals happening to be in the back ground. well see how this goes...
DEMONBEELv4DEMONBEE
unfortunately like most self inserts the new mc basically steals all achievements of the original mc
Tierthu_Fraille:yeah, this story makes me feel like the OC is native and Harry Potter transmigrated to the OC's life/world without any idea. thing is I read Harry Potter so I should be able to relate to their characters, but I haven't read about the story of Arthur Kingscrown. He sounds great but I've never heard of him.
SirPugsilusLv4SirPugsilus
Daoist_DanLv10Daoist_Dan
There's what, 10 original sentences in the entirety of this chapter? The ONLY worthwhile information you gave us in this chapter was his weak presence and self-control not to jump into fights because someone was being a meany. It's disapointing, I've read this chapter before a hundred times over. Also, please god don't have listened to these morons begging for a harem. What guy reads fanfiction for the romance?
ExpermoLv5Expermo
HazielrLv5Hazielr
SheeniusLv11Sheenius
silencedmanLv4silencedman
DeathLingersLv13DeathLingers
