MrE
jxt ch 1 & 2 is making me lose interest in the novel. Those 2 ch are to make the story line clear and also pique the interest of the reader but u blazed through it and the abilities what made him aware of it? a system?a god? and why is the mother crying? and why is does he want to celebrate his decision to join the NBA at 10 years old according to your synopsis?in fact what year did he die and what year did he return to ? there are a lot of details missing fom the first two chapters. i advice you read '' BE HAPPY WITH SPORTS and ALMIGHTY COACH'' then rewrite your novel bcos the idea and character of this novel is solid but too abstract