Comments of chapter undefined of I Cant Miss !!!

Dude, why are the names so bad, Eazy? Really? Rasta? Flo? Opal? No one is called like that. Not even in Jamaica. You could have came up with better names by picking random letters out of a hat..

Skills are useless without strategy and energy to pull them off

"My arms are starting to ache" .-. where is the unlimited stamina?

I wonder how in the **** will your MC ever have any conflict at all with these abilities.

Well he can't miss with those abilities

jxt ch 1 & 2 is making me lose interest in the novel. Those 2 ch are to make the story line clear and also pique the interest of the reader but u blazed through it and the abilities what made him aware of it? a system?a god? and why is the mother crying? and why is does he want to celebrate his decision to join the NBA at 10 years old according to your synopsis?in fact what year did he die and what year did he return to ? there are a lot of details missing fom the first two chapters. i advice you read '' BE HAPPY WITH SPORTS and ALMIGHTY COACH'' then rewrite your novel bcos the idea and character of this novel is solid but too abstract

y does he say he is short... 5.2" at 10 years age is tall... and height at that age should be around 4.5" to 4.7" isn't it

mc wont be NTR rigth nothing will be happening with his woman and mc right? that the only thing that i wont tolerate to read cause i have a weak heart when it come to thing like this.

Way too rushed author

2nd ability, can’t get tired while playing any sports. Wtf why his arms aching. Thats the sign of tiredness

very detailed script with little important things

What year is this set?

noice

Does he not feel sad about leaving his wife and his son? Also how the fk is he past 5 feet when he is 10 years old.

Alguna falta de ortografía

Love it

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nice

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