Kotario
your wrap up of this chapter without the emotion makes the end of the chapter feel rushed and forced and cut off and since this is my first comment throughout the whole book I just wanna say i do like the book but considering how much I'm gonna have to pay come premium I really hate the repetitive announcements feels like filler like I'm not trying to even hide it filler
I think you're doing great. No bull****ting around, I mean, why would there be any bull****ting? As 2 people which realized they both reincarnated / had memories of a past timeline, there's no reason not to speak openly. I'm curious what you thought for this backstory, and how things will change in this timeline (whatever threatened Draco's life that made Eva do what she did will probably appear in this timeline as well in the future, but knowing before .... would let them prepare) All in all, I'm quite satisfied with how the story is going, you keep doing what you do Kotario and you will have fun doing it and we will enjoy alongside :D