Comments of chapter undefined of New Game+

I've got no idea what's happening, who are they fighting? Aliens or themselves??

I’m just gonna keep on going in hopes of understanding the plot and descriptions.

I'd say it's also a bit strange with the names. Seeker, Carlean, Zeek, Death Tide, General, etc.. It's hard to tell if a friendly is talking or an enemy cause they jump back and forth without really describing it, while friendly and enemy units call (I assume MC) all his different names..

So where's the ALIEN? Who is Who? Who is the good guys and Who is the bas guy?

Ah, I thought i was the only one who didn’t understand what’s going on.

2 chapters in and it’s an absolute ****show, most incomprehensible garbage I’ve ever seen

Pretty same for me, I just kept reading in hope next chapter is more clear... Author I think you might need to redo your early chapters. To harmonise informations so is more readable...

Looks like i have to use my brain at 15% to understand things😅🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

no idea whats happening here

No idea....

to many formally unintroduce characters and incomprehensible info dumps!! you should've atleast say where they are and what kind of operation they're doing!. and the naming! my god! you named a bunch of them but you still call here/him general this or general that, you should've just describe each of their appearance for now and revealed them later when they made their appearance when he regressed as naming them now will be redundant in further chapters.

☀🔸☀♦🔅☀🔅♦☀🔸☀ ✨💧✨ Thanks ✨💧✨ ☀🔸☀♦🔅☀🔅♦☀🔸☀ ───── Foя тнє cнαpтєя ────────── from Jack

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

I'm really trying to push through these first chapters. it took me a whole day to muster the attention to finish these first 2 chapters. hoping it gets better

Reportando: Estoy confundido...

Is Hanson a different person from Hansen ? If they are which one is male or female?

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Thanks 👍

please write Death Tide in every sentence because if you don't, i would never be able to understand what is going on......