DaoistZenFeng
I had high hopes after first 2 chapters, but I just went through 4-5 chapters about how some random players are trash (as people and skill) and all I could think while reading (skimming when it did not stop to describe how shameless they are) why so much emphasis on this people??? waste of your time as many people just skip those parts.
Is no one going to address that he got his math wrong with flickering steps it's a "350% boost note just 350 % imagine 100% of one and you add 350% that would be 450% so you would have 4.5 samething in this case 450% or 4.5 time 30 is 135 not 105 sorry this was just bothering me thanks for the chapter
Just wanted to add something. You should maybe try to ‘show and not tell’, more. There is so much description of how despicable the three people are or how ‘fast’ he could go. It feels like you are explaining the obvious repeatedly, like we can’t understand simple logic. For people that try to reason through and imagine the story, this is very frustrating. It took so long for the mc to kill 3 people. Even if he was playing with them, he said so much irrelevant internal dialogue on how insulted he felt. As it stands, there is too much thinking and talking and too little action. I think that part of the beauty of a story is that it is open for interpretation in multiple ways. For example, when the mc was accused of sneak attacking, he could have scrunched his face in anger or annoyance a bit and that would have been sufficient. It would be up to the readers to imagine exactly how angry he was and what he might have been thinking. So far it feels like you are forcing me to think a certain way while reading the story and in some cases, to not even think at all. Sure, it is alright to include thoughts, but when they consistently take up to 1/4 of a chapter, there is a problem.
So are we just ignoring that the World Boss is basically doing the same damage as a non-elite common boar? Tank gets attacked on his back when he turns around, and it doesnt beat the damage from that random boar mob a couple chapters ago? Whats next, the final boss of a dungeon manages to match the damage of a random skeleton thats half the level and non-elite?
The amount of time you have spent on describing these people, their disdainment, etc... they better carry on throughout the story. This is literally a case of Chekov's gun!!! Why put so much emphasis into something/someone when they have no meaning? I get he's new to the situation, but your not even talking about him!! lol
This novel is info dumps... Also did shadow wulf just ignored that tank? Why another giy get insta stabt in the back but this guy actually got without dmg at all? Also what are these info dumps? Also no-one was interested into this trash characters. Also group play is good move. Now he has tank and healer wich are good.