DaoistZenFeng
Don't make the same mistake as every novel out there add a female and the male ALWAYS listen to what she says and asks intact if you don't make him the cold type that is cold towards other females then his mom I'm prolly gonna remove it to much like real life when the male mc gets hen pecked by the females then ostracized the moment he stops doing what she says
The stories interesting but it all feels pointless? I might just be nagging but the MC seems irresponsible. Knowing what kind of people they were, the MC just needed to kill them from the start, yet he decided to play with them causing Lunaâs party to suffer, yet then he steps in to save them?? It seems pointless seeing as how itâs technically his fault in a way... itâs an interesting concept at least. Donât mean to nag just saying my opinion.
I don't know why but apperently in a original novel everybody thinks they can give their cheap opinion and has to be respected. Do you see everyone commenting in every single chapter in any easter fantasy novel about the plot and author's choice? He is making this development for a reason and is still only chapter 6, omg, so annoying, just read and enjoy, if not, then quit.
Yeah I canât stand this. 6 whole chapters of him just standing by watching the fight . NO ONE WANTS TO READ RANDOM PLAYERS FIGHTING. The plot is so predictable. People try to steal his gear , we know heâll just kill them, a random party runs into trouble with a boss, heâll come out of nowhere and defeat the boss. So plain and boring wasting 5 chapters of him not fighting and just standing there watching . Like do you honestly thing people wanna read the MAIN CHARACTER watching a random party fighting a boss? No