TomVanDyke
Nothing stands out at the moment not sure why everyone's hyping it up. World setting seeming more like insignificant filler atm. Nothings happened and seems generic poor person from far away finds old teacher and learns he has mysterious powers people want to capture him for WOOOOW. This is so original you should copyright it. Just started the novel so I may be wrong but just wanted to give in unbiased opinion coz the comments seem fake as **** at the moment.
I think I read a bit more but ended up stopping since I had a few more complaints a bit down the line. Looks like it's unfinished, have you actually re-read it multiple times, u think its that good? Worth giving it another shot?
dimmdcmm:Hi! I'm on my 6th reread and finding old comments like these always peaks my interest. So here are my questions for you: did you continue reading or did you drop this? And if you kept reading, did you enjoy what you read?