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Reincarnating as Issei Hyodo in DxD world
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Isas was a 25 year old man who was very good at flirting with girls, but he also liked to help people's, as the meaning of his name Isas was worthy which he got from the orphanage where he lived until 18. Since he got help from people, he also wanted to help everyone he can in return. He's also a great fan of the Anime Highschool dxd, he always hated the fact that the MC Issei Hyodo didn't **** any of the girls, even after they were in love with him and slept naked with him. Isas sometimes even thought Issei's little brother didn't work. Either that or he must swing the other way, because even after sleeping with so many beauties he never saw it standing. Isas always wished that he could be Issei, so that he could treat all the girls lovingly and **** them as much as he could, of course that's a dream he knows won't come true. Today was Isas's 26th birthday, he was all alone Even though he had a lot of girls he had slept with, all of them were just one time stands as he didn't want to get involve in love, he had never fallen in love with any one. Since today was his birthday, he wanted to have dinner with the granny or the landlord of the house he lived in, who was the only person to ever show any kindness to Isas. After the orphanage . So he went downstairs and asked Isas: "Hey granny, since today is my birthday let's go and get some food for dinner, I will make grilled chicken for you" . Granny: "No, you should not bother with me and go out for dinner with your friends, I am fine just your sincerity is enough" Isas: " What are you saying granny, you know I always liked to celebrate my birthday with you, don't you want to commemorate with me anymore " Granny: " ok, ok, you don't have to be so emotional, this trick you use to coex girl's won't be of much help with me, but I will go with you since today is your birthday" (coex ? Typo?) Isas blushes a little since he was caught and said : " Thanks granny, let's go and do a little shopping shall we " Isas and Granny went to the nearest supermarket to buy the ingredients for today's dinner but an accident happened. All of a sudden a thief with a gun started shooting in the air and demanded the cashier to give him all the cash. At that time there were not many people, only 5 which includes the cashier and one helper. Granny was very scared as started shivering (Shaking? Shivering implies cold), Granny's son and daughter-in-law were not in the city so she didn't know what to do, in panic she was trying to call the police . Of course the thief saw her fiddling with her phone and shouted pointing his gone (gun?). She was so scared she dropped the phone and the theif (third time you write Theif, it's thief) saw the speed dial was to the police, in anger he was was going to pull the trigger. At the exact moment our MC Isas came btw (between?) them with a knife which he had just taken from the shop, he slashed the knife towards the arm of the thief which was holding the gun, at the impact of the knife and arm connecting he dropped the gun, as the gun fell and recoiled a bullet went straight for the MC's heart. The moment the thief dropped the gun the cashier, the helper and other customer all jumped at the thief, punching and kicking and tied him up. Though he saved Granny's life, since he was shot at the heart it was obvious he was dying, as he opened his eyes he saw the granny crying and calling his name. In the last moment of his life he thought it would have been great if Rias Gremory came here right know and revived him from his death. He knew it was impossible and could only dream about it, so he begged to god or goddess 'I don't know if reincarnation is real or not but, if it is, then I want be born as Issei Hyodo from high school dxd who had everything, his parents, friends as well as a harem of beautiful girls'. You didn't make that many mistakes, it was more about punctuation and sentence structuring. Y
