Comments of chapter undefined of Riser Phenex isn't a villain

sigh the writting is getting bad not the quality but the way akikan40 is using too much filler words , so insteads of getting to the point he goes around and put some unnecessary explanation its too much , its ruining the fanfic . Sigh

Dump of very unnecessary information in 2 chapters completely useless after what happened in previous chapters this is like the calm before the storm

So much monologue and dump of unnecessary information..... last 4 chapters are like that..... This fic is getting bad [img=angry]

I don't know maybe a little boring but nonetheless thanks for the chapter

The Story is getting Dragged out, you don't have to explain everything and everyone's motivation all the time

This fanfic is a constant cycle chapters of unnecessary information, then a Riser acting as a Chinese protagonist and then a chapter of scenes H to clean up the previous error

In this chapter nothing happened, chapters that are to reaffirm what we know are unnecessary

I just want to know what's going on between him and Sona now...

Ffs you're a really bad writer; as in, learn to 'SHOW' not 'TELL'! I thought that you improved a bit but these last chapters are complete garbage. Just a bunch of unnecessary, filler words without some redeeming qualities. You don't need to 'tell' the characters motivations and reasons with pure author monologue to your audience, rather you must 'show' them through the characters' actions etc, be it implicitly or explicitly. Then again, what do we expect of akikan? A mediocre, third-rate writer that writes garbage and trash.

its seem like a chinese novel.

"How many times are you going to tell them that this is a typical Akikan writing style?" I asked another old Akikan reader. ".....I give up, they are very stubborn."

It's going to happen again

You really love to drag things out don't you

A qualidade de escrita caiu muito, o autor fica dando voltas e mais voltas sobre o assunto.

Gracias por el capitulo

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