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  • GreatGil
    GreatGil7mth
    Commented

    Too much yapping, idiot.

    Ch 142 Who is going to win again?
    Riser Phenex isn't a villain
    Anime & Comics · akikan40
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  • GreatGil
    GreatGil8mth
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    Ffs you're a really bad writer; as in, learn to 'SHOW' not 'TELL'! I thought that you improved a bit but these last chapters are complete garbage. Just a bunch of unnecessary, filler words without some redeeming qualities. You don't need to 'tell' the characters motivations and reasons with pure author monologue to your audience, rather you must 'show' them through the characters' actions etc, be it implicitly or explicitly. Then again, what do we expect of akikan? A mediocre, third-rate writer that writes garbage and trash.

    Ch 122 Be his strength!
    Riser Phenex isn't a villain
    Anime & Comics · akikan40
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  • GreatGil
    GreatGil8mth
    Commented

    As expected. Trash.

    Ch 115 Shatter!
    Riser Phenex isn't a villain
    Anime & Comics · akikan40
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  • GreatGil
    GreatGil8mth
    Replied to 17541916_Black

    Yes, cause Sirzechs' power was arguably 10x that of OG Lucifer; Riser's overall power and demonic power, with 'Crisis' and 'Overtime', was in the upper-level of 'Satan' class and pushing to the anomalies (the Super Devils). This directly refer to Vali's Juggernaut Drive, as Juggernaut Drive pushed Vali's threat level to 'Satan' class and Riser handled Vali easily. In conclusion, Riser's power is less than half of that Sirzechs. Yet, demonic power and capabilities aren't the end and be all of it.

    Ch 114 Being a villain is so much fun~!
    Riser Phenex isn't a villain
    Anime & Comics · akikan40
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  • GreatGil
    GreatGil8mth
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    Typical akikan, stalling and stalling is the only things that you're good at. A real action after 60 or so chapters, you should be ashamed of yourself. By the way, learn to "show', not 'tell'

    Ch 108 Juggernaut Drive
    Riser Phenex isn't a villain
    Anime & Comics · akikan40
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