Comments of chapter undefined of The Hitting Zone

Dear author, I have noticed that your really digging hard to convey the emotional ups and downs of a close knit family. You have been constantly improving your craft and the result shows Impressively😍🤩😍

A*** that made me teary eyed. Oh Jake you'll improve... baby steps is key. It's great to have Kyle back hopefully he'll be fine now. Thanks for the chapter!

Bahaha omg “are you breaking up with meee??” 😂😂😂 Glad to see Kyle back in action, but I also have to say I’m super impressed you so realistically had him flounder for a bit. His emotions and reactions were super real, and that makes the Atkins family even more authentic to me :)

the little manbino can retort now!!

I wasn't expecting the brother "breakup" 😂 but honestly it ended up being rather fitting since the twins have never been too serious to begin with

Thanks

Back to normal...we will see...thanks for the chapter coach

Thx 4 the chapter!

It was a good talk, Kyle and Jake! 😭👍

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Seems to me that Jake is turning into a little Zeke.. 😅

You just got it in you. Tnx halfty.. Lovely chapter

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Aww. I feel emotional. In a good way. It just feels so good and nice to see them reconcile and figure out how to express themselves to each other. I really love that. Thanks for the chapter!

Thank you for another great chapter.

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the great chapter :)

Thank you for the chapter !

by the way fellow readers do any of you remember the chapter when mom atkins was in a trip looking for information of jake?? the one that resulted in the talk about adopting jake... i looking for the chapter because i want to read the scene of the atkins parents asking to the kids about adopting jake especialy the scene between mama atkins and zeke that its my favorite scene of this novel.