Comments of chapter undefined of The Hitting Zone
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It’s weird this is the first story I’ve got a geographical connection to it’s a good story kinda funny to see you talk about going from So-Cal to Watsonville as a long drive without traffic it’s like a 6 hour drive from anywhere from San Diego or L.A. to San Jose which is after Watsonville it’s a small thing but to people in Cali a 6-8 hour drive is a long day trip I get for the transfer to a foster home and all meeting in the early day would be better but it’s just an odd travel time where it seems like the hotel scene was added for for no reason..... wow that seems like a lot of complaining but I do like your story I think that just stuck in my head because I was excited about a story from an area near me love your story keep up the good work
