Comments of chapter undefined of Pokemon - A Mystical Journey
Pokemon - A Mystical Journey
Darthnorther
Chapter comments14
The second half of this volume just felt off. Like a perfect mix of cringe and filler that made me want to drop the story. I'd rather timeskip past any personality changes than have them shown like this (aka poorly). I felt like every other sentence was like "this is going to change him" or "he won't be the same person" and honestly that's fine to say once, but not once a chapter. Honestly this half of this arc made me wish the MC was older from the start. No one would be happy following lead of 10 year old, and any avenues to mitigate that feel absolutely cringe inducing.
nobody more loyal than zoro in one piece and now Electabuzz in this fan-fic those words of Electabuzz I liked remember the confidence in Alex and determination of greatness nobody more loyal than zoro in one piece and now Electabuzz in this fan-fic those words of Electabuzz I liked remember the confidence in Alex and determination of greatness thanks for the chapter
