Daoist_Over_God
That’s a waste of a wish Spidey already has a healing factor everyone knows I would have gone for something like being able to stimulate the nervous system to not only allow me to heal quicker but also be able the manually increase brain function so I can think quicker develop better momery even increase the functionality of Spidey Sense to be more of a percognitive then just focusing on danger
Daoist_Over_God:No, because a Harem in the USA with modern Americans won't work, I'm trying to write this in the frame of mind as something to send Marvel, I even have this great twist to him being from the Marvel Universe the whole time. You know the world where Spiderman met Stan Lee and took him web-slinging. He's from that world, even his last name is Petrus which is the Latin Origin for the name Peter. Get it, Parker Peter. But there will be saucy parts with MJ and Him, that stuff can be shortened when I send this one into Marvel.
I'm already getting the feeling that this is gonna be a novel for masochistic people, because the mc and his girlfriend/s have the same powers and the mc just gives everything he has to the girls. There's nothing wrong with it but it ruins the mc because he's not special, this is further proven by the fact that MJ didn't just get the Spider-Man powers but also the accelerated healing. -_-
Same spider bite... are they gonna be mad horny for eachother like peter and cindy moon were? Otherwise you should have let MJ get bit by a different spider, they're basically the same now. Should have let her have some other spider power like miles morales spider or the hormone control one or just make your own spider power based on some random spuder facts, it would be more interesting than carbon copies