ash_knight17
Author, the year isn't adding up right when Vivian and the "slave girl" met. The year and scene here is set for 1777 after Leo returned home, but in YMDP storyline, the year is set for 1778. There are two different years for the same events that are occuring at or around the same time and are intertwining with one another, so what's going on here with the years?... Also, in the YMDP storyline, it was said that the slave (Penny) was 18 years old, but here it's saying she's no more than 16 years old... Another thing the whether condition and the time of year seems to be off, but I could be wrong... Just trying to understand the storyline better... Also, I'm not trying to spoil anything here esp those who haven't read the other book(s) yet, but it's hard when you started reading the book that comes after this one first to a certain point and some things aren't adding up right. Even though it's says you can read this book series as stand alones, I don't recommend doing so and start at the beginning to understand the storyline better esp the prequels of the books. It's feels like you're backtracking when reading out of order. Just my opinion though...