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  • Shannon_Hetrick
    Shannon_Hetrick10mth
    Replied to Niclu22

    You can keep scrolling on by if you don't like my comment. No need to be rude. Sorry but I like consistent details even if they are small ones. It creates more of a vivid detail to the story or character.

    The tear of the dress came out to be a harsh sound and Penny's eyes turned wide like saucers. His hands next reached for her hair which she had tied it in a single braid. He started to unwind them one after another until the last one. Using both his hands he combed her hair to spread them out evenly. Before she could ask him, he said,
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  • Shannon_Hetrick
    Shannon_Hetrick1yr
    Replied to Emma_Torrez_2592

    Thank you for pointing that out. I wasn't even thinking of the councilman. LoL.

    "What is the council thinking by allowing a woman take part in the examination as if she would clear the exam. A woman is supposed to cook and clean the house and if need satisfy the man in the bed than roam out here shamelessly alone," Vivian's face snapped to look at him. The man had come across many to know how one would react, especially if she was here it would mean he would have quite a temper character as this was no place for a sweet girl. They had three days, with nine males and one woman, surely he could have his amusement. Ready to hear her retort, he waited for her to throw words of whiplash.
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  • Shannon_Hetrick
    Shannon_Hetrick2yr
    Replied to euqvinx

    More like 70 years difference. LoL.

    Ch 755 You and me- Part 2
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  • Shannon_Hetrick
    Shannon_Hetrick2yr
    Commented

    This was a heartbreaking chapter. My heart broke for Penny and even cried that she had witnessed her father being murdered by own mother. I was hoping Penny's father had survived somehow and was still living. I can't wait for her mother to get what she deserves.

    Ch 735 Pain- Part 2
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  • Shannon_Hetrick
    Shannon_Hetrick2yr
    Replied to Tess_Le_Blanc

    That was a different coachman dear. After the Quinn's coachman dropped Grace off, she took a local carriage to Robarte's place and that was the coachman that was killed.

    Ch 730 Missing person- Part 2
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  • Shannon_Hetrick
    Shannon_Hetrick2yr
    Commented

    Why would they need to hide the black witches in the houses after they killed them!? They turned to dust after they were killed. Unless they mean their clothes that was left behind...

    Ch 721 Ride- Part 1
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  • Shannon_Hetrick
    Shannon_Hetrick2yr
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    What about the healing potion that Penny created in Valeria!? Could that help her in some way to heal the effects it's causing her!? Hoping something helps her with reversing the effects!...

    Ch 719 Eloped couple- Part 2
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  • Shannon_Hetrick
    Shannon_Hetrick2yr
    Replied to jespoisson

    I thought the same thing. Black witches are supposed to sense and recognize a white witch when they see one. So why didn't all these black witches recognized Penny as a white witch then!? That doesn't make any sense unless maybe she masked herself from them or something, but then again she can purified the air around her that could've masked her as well...

    Ch 714 Full house- Part 3
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  • Shannon_Hetrick
    Shannon_Hetrick2yr
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    This has been on my mind throughout the story... I think it's extremely unfair for the white witches that if they use self defense by killing the other person who's trying to kill them or another person esp when it's an innocent person, that they would start to get traits of a black witch. If white witches didn't do it for protection or self defense, they would be the ones who were killed or the person that was getting protected. Wished something was done about this cause it's not fair at all...

    Ch 703 The wait- Part 2
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  • Shannon_Hetrick
    Shannon_Hetrick2yr
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    Even though those who were corrupted in the household families that were part of the alignment of stars died from it or those they killed cause of it, there are still survivors that didn't get corrupted or died cause of it. So technically they didn't kill the entire household of families. This stupid councilwoman would've know there were still survivors from the families with the alignment of stars. So how was that killing everyone when there are survivors!? The councilwoman and the black witches didn't even know who was part of the alignment with the stars and that's the reason for targeting the families. Just because certian people in the household was corrupted and died or killed doesn't mean they were part of the alignment of stars. I can see why they are labeled as stupid and not wise!!... How did they even know which families' household would have person with the alignment of stars!? Did I miss or overlook that part?...

    Ch 702 The wait- Part 1
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  • Shannon_Hetrick
    Shannon_Hetrick2yr
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    What's the point of the white witches getting the elements bestowed upon them if it's going to lead to becoming a black witch!? These elements are for white witches to get but doesn't make sense what-so-ever if that's going to happen them! It's pointless to even have them then! The white witches that does come across the knowledge of having element ability within them has to get the help of a black witch in the first place to summon their element if it chooses to come, but if they do get the ability bestowed upon them, it will lead to becoming a black witch themselves. A black witch can't possess the elements so why even bestow the white witches with their element ability if it's going to lead them to the forbidden magic and causing them to turn into a black witch!?...

    Ch 693 Trial- Part 2
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  • Shannon_Hetrick
    Shannon_Hetrick2yr
    Commented

    It's saying that Damien realized he wanted to marry Penelope while in Valeria, but in actuality, in the very beginning he wanted to marry her the moment he saw her esp when making her his at the slave auction.

    Ch 692 Trial- Part 1
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  • Shannon_Hetrick
    Shannon_Hetrick2yr
    Commented

    It was said that the wind element was blind now it's saying he could see Penny and even Caitlin. Did I read something wrong!?... Also, it was said before that the water element's name was Seira/Siera, but now it's saying her name is Sally. So which name is she supposed to go by!?...

    Ch 690 Wind Bearer- Part 1
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  • Shannon_Hetrick
    Shannon_Hetrick2yr
    Commented

    I thought it was the witch hunters that discovered the black witches (Laurae and Robarte) at the inn & not white witches!? Plus white witches don't have the ability to spot black witches.

    Ch 687 Drops of water- Part 1
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  • Shannon_Hetrick
    Shannon_Hetrick2yr
    Commented

    I thought in the beginning of the book it was said that Robarte was a "pure blooded vampire" & not a regular vampire!? Maybe I read it wrong though... 🤔🤷

    Ch 683 Long time no see- Part 2
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  • Shannon_Hetrick
    Shannon_Hetrick2yr
    Commented

    Don't you mean half-vampire!? LoL.

    "Can anyone hear me? Please help me! I am a human and not a frog!" 
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  • Shannon_Hetrick
    Shannon_Hetrick2yr
    Commented

    I don't trust Evelyn regardless of Damien saying she's harmless. Said the same thing about Helen and look how she turned out.

    Ch 660 To keep or throw- Part 3
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  • Shannon_Hetrick
    Shannon_Hetrick2yr
    Replied to Vivian_Carmichael1

    I'm pretty sure it was said that Sabbi/Ester was in Mythweald since that land mainly has humans reside in at and barely any witches were caught living there. I could be wrong too. LoL.

    Ch 651 Time to leave- Part 2
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  • Shannon_Hetrick
    Shannon_Hetrick2yr
    Commented

    I was really hoping that the human and the vampire, Henry, would've made it out alive with them! That's really sad they had to die among the others as well! 😔😥

    Ch 645 Blood- Part 1
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  • Shannon_Hetrick
    Shannon_Hetrick2yr
    Commented

    The calculations with the number of people who are left is wrong. It was said there was 9 other candidates besides the 3 of them, but when they left the latest discovery of bodies, they should've been down to 6 suspects & then down to 5 with the next body they came across. However when the black witches appeared, there was 4 of them plus the human they were holding captive which makes 5 but then Helen comes out from behind the tree to make 6... Maybe I misread something but that's how I'm reading it & I even read over it multiple times...

    Ch 642 Ritual of black witches- Part 3
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