akikan40
Wait I thought Nanami is from Kyoto. Why did you change it to Osaka? Or maybe it's just a mistake you've made. Another point that i notice how the funk Shishio get chill by cold outside? I thought this guy is x3 stronger that normal humans so how the funk he trembled outdoor or he just pretended to get chill or what. If that the case, it's unnecessary since he's supposed to be stronger and inhumane than others. I think you have to review a little bit your characters since there're some mistake.