Comments of chapter undefined of Greater Than Gods: Chojusen Akimichi [Complete: I'm On The Job Editting~ This Is What I'm Suppose To Write, Right?]
Greater Than Gods: Chojusen Akimichi [Complete: I'm On The Job Editting~ This Is What I'm Suppose To Write, Right?]
BrightDawn
Chapter comments58
Ok I think that people are being a bit unfair to the author and the system . The user is a puppet? Well are we not all puppets to our circumstances? We are slaves to it really because while we could use our will to change our circumstances it is only possible if we have a will that never breaks so the MC is still in the same situation as a normal person
He is not being controlled *literally. The system just guiding him and want show what kind world he is in. Is just kinda ermm annoying the limiter author made. Its like "im gonna make op mc but later on, opps it will gonna be boring so lets nerf him and just make a catalyst to activate hes opness"look one punch man he op as fcvk but its so good that u will crave for More. but overall its a good novel so keep it up fellow daoist. Dont dropped . this is much better than other naruto ff
Also this is a stupid plot armour, how did he remove or ignore deactivate the seal? So what if he deactivated the limiter because his emotional state, or got the stage 2 eyes, it doesnt explain how he ignored the seal as even if he has high states he would still be affected unless he unlocked the seak or cut off his tongue and regrew it later using his yin yang regrowth technique
This chapter was not sad at all, it was aggravating. For one, the person who died had no relation to anything, he was a nobody. Second, you just brushed over the killing like it was not even that important, but then contradicted this by making it something that changed him. Third, you completely skipped over the fact that he was played into a position that put everything at risk, just to make him see that it was a dog eat dog world. Fourth, you brushed along his mental state afterward like it was a small detail. Killing and the emotional change afterward are supposed to be a major point to the development of the character, as such you can't skip over it. What makes it more annoying, is because the person was a stranger and a nobody, so he wouldn't make such an impact on him. It would have been a more tragic scene, and had more impact if the person to die had some meaning, not only to the story but also the character that would kill them. But then again this whole thing would have had no meaning in the first place, the academy and the jounin sensei would have made him have his first kill anyway, just to prepare them for the ninja world. The limiter no longer has a meaning other then to weaken him, it is just training wheels that he needs to get rid of at this point.