Comments of chapter undefined of Marvel's Ultra-Saiyan
Marvel's Ultra-Saiyan
Shaikh_Tohaa
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Shaikh_Tohaa
Now I hate his parents. So it was never Sandra's fault. It would be awesome if Bruce overheard everything because of his enhanced senses. Since the maid was never evil and was ordered to act that way then I am all for her joining the harem and Bruce forcefully taking his life out of the hands of his parents. I mean he is supposed to be really old from living out a full life in the DBZ universe right? So him following after his parents at this point when they are evil makes no sense.
It is at these times that I realize how limited English is in the cursing department. The plot did not need this subplot, after all, I see in your writing an easier way to describe everyday life, Slice of life itself, without all that dramatic exaggeration that is outside your domain. And as much as I encourage experimentation, you should take it easy.
SIGH damn I knew it, I knew there would be a fucking BS reason to explain why sandra was cheating on him so the mc would end up accepting sandra with open arms like all the simps mcs. ok ignoring the simpness for sandra, i must say author i will be very disappointed if another shitty BS reason gets in the way of mc and jean's relationship. I'm not saying you will, but if you used a BS and predictable reason to "blow our minds" and put a "twist'' on the story then you can do it again. Half the readers may have been like: '' Wow what an amazing turn of events Wow'' but I kind of saw this shit coming some time ago
