Comments of chapter undefined of Lord Shadow

So wait... the shadowlord who rules in the night would do worse in the night? Umm k

Thanks for reading

3 things great plot fleshed out characters NO SMOKING

Author-sama this is one of the best stories I've read so far.

Thank you for the chapter. I was going to comment on why the MC was sweating after killing only 10 zombies when he had already fought against a large group of them before. But then you did a great job of explaining it on the very next paragraph.

thanks for the chapter

The thing about memories wasn't that many of them inevitably faded, but that repeated recall of the ones you remembered burnished them into shining, gorgeous lies Dexter Palmer, Version Control

Pffft the sovereign of darkness does worse at night, makes sense to me.

1st day he reached lvl 18, 2nd day he only got 1 lvl? Logic man, and I thought his first priority is to get back and collect the ownerless skill books.

Wow...I'm getting more excited 👏

noice

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We all practice self-deception to a degree; no man can handle complete honesty without being cut at each turn. There's not enough room in a man's head for sanity alongside each grief, each worry, each terror that he owns. I’m well used to burying such things in a dark cellar and moving on. Mark Lawrence, Prince of Fools (The Red Queen's War, #1)

Stories

Thanks

Very Good

All chapters so far need major editing. Mostly the problem is mixing and switching between past- and present tenses But also a lot of small grammatical errors.

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