Comments of chapter undefined of Lord Shadow

The first part of the novel about Asifs life experience seems very personal

"...." please use this like other people '....' is just not suitable unless your vision is superb. Well seems like we will have a good character since he mentioned he had alot of dark thoughts he never thought of doing so maybe now he will

Grammar is bad, story seems interesting though 👀👌

A word for the Author. Thank you. First time reading a Novel written by a Malaysian. Keep it up. Malaysia boleh. Whatever negative comments you encounter, don't worry about it too much. Use it to further develop and improve yourself. Go for it bro and don't get discourage

If you guys are from Malaysia then you guys might have know this sentence 'mak kau hijau'

First kill

Tx

It feel kinda weird reading a story from my own country.. First time reading this kind of story where the main character is Malaysian ..😅

Cheers Malaysia 🇲🇾

Apocalypse w/ game system? I’m hooked. Just make sure the mc isn’t a muscle-brained Neanderthal and I’m good. I love this genre.

really surprised to see a novel wrote by fellow Malaysian!! go for it bro!!

thanks for the chapter

This chapter has a huge improvement just like the first. however it reads a bit clunky. I would say it needs to be refined more. Also if you change something in one place remember to change it everywhere else too.

interesting though was hard to read through the mindset of a pathetic incel hopefully he loses those fantasies and grows up in the future

To the editor

Great chapter, I think you managed to capture the initial chaos of a catastrophe situation very well.

lok

this novel is interesting

Had me in the first half not gonna lie