Comments of chapter undefined of The Strongest System in Dragon Ball World

Honestly the day that authors realize reading about a clueless mc gets annoying is the day story quality increases.

if bulma got together with vegeta it would be weird since all he does is train no point getting together with him hes just like kalan IMO

Change the name of the chapter, Kalan pretty much didn't talk and was pretty uncaring of the situation. Lame! Can't he talk from the heart and be smooth? 5/10 chapter rating.

One of the biggest reasons people pushed for Kalan x Bulma was because they liked Bulma's character and felt bad for her romantic life which included Yamcha cheating on her and Vegeta where she was just kind of left to the side and neglected for years. People wanted her inclusion, not just a rehash with a different man.

Seriously the story is no longer making sense and I rarely diss on a novel but come on author, really? This reminds me of the dumb sudden break up from Master of All that made me immediately drop the novel. Like seriously you even made it out that Kalan was interested in the beginning and was smart at figuring things out yet all of a sudden he is too dumb to at least end it decently? I don’t even care about the relationship anymore but this chapter made Kalan’s character digressed into an ioditic person who can’t understand the basic decency of treating a girl. Jeez author get your stuff together. Stop writing for a while if you have to abd refresh on your ideas. You may not think it’s important but it’s moments like this that caused many fans to lose faith in your ability and question their decision to continue reading your novel due to their disappointment.

Ok so in 127 chapters I haven't complained about anything but this time I have to, first off you should have never even put Kalan and bulma together, they should have just been like friends or been a couple but didn't date for very long, and one more thing, I think you need a break from writing this novel and should focus on your other novels and the reason why I say this is because the quality of your chapters as gone down to be completely honest, and this is completely my opinion I hope you do this.

made her inmortal-.-

FeelsBadMan, the dude is already so powerful already. Why can't we have a Kalan baby with Bulma?

And before i forget.... Man u can‘t go from 4/5 daily chapters down to 1.... Love the story but the waiting is killing me after getting used to the fast releases

Did you need to drag this so called talk just to upload this farce between the two of them?

Honestly should just use the system to find a way to help Bulma train to some degree so she can just conveniently follow Kalan along and stay relevant. I'm all for harem, as long as romantic interests stay relevant to the story. What about some black star dragonballs and using wishes to change her bloodline if need be, ect.

I've read this story from it's first release, and after it shot up in the rankings the writing has become increasingly lazy. Kaplan has become just as much of a dunce as the rest of the Saiyans for no apparent reason. He gives up entirely on the relationship with Bulma despite not even putting much work into it in the first place AND abdicated his throne to Broly just so he can spend all of his time training for threats that WON'T BE RELEVANT FOR YEARS. He has no goals, no obstacles, and no development so we end up with chapters like the last few dozen where there is no ******* and he's just left in a corner to beat his meat because the author cannot think of anything else for him to do. It makes me so mad because this fic had SO MUCH POTENTIAL, but now it's clear you're not even really trying to review criticism or improve. It feels like you're continuing to write this solely due to the fact that it's high on the rankings.

mc went from smart to stupid didn't even try for fucks sake a clone and he gave her eternal youth for christs sake wtf she was with vegeta and all he did was train this novel has gone down hill guess im gonna have to drop this novel damn had so much potential.

Yoooo bulma better not go to vegeta cuz that's not IT

Vegeta and bulma is just gonna be weird now... smh

i think i drop the novel for a time - like a month or two . the chapters are geting shorter and shorter , almost nothing happens . if i wait a month i get 30 chapters so i thin a bit more than 30 min reading .

Why is kalan more clueless than goku like 🤦🏽‍♂️ is that possible

The bulma and Kaplan breaking up thing is kinda forced I mean kalani technically ruined any chance of normalcy for her by making her eternally young so I think this is mostly for ******* and then maybe magically get back together and he helps change her bloodline or something to make her strong after she gets kidnapped/killed or something and she stops whining about him training when he rescues her or something along those lines

i feel someone that had lived through a 1st life shouldnt be this dense..... come on now... if he was a true blue OC that was born in the DB world i can accept denseness but really even if dragonball is a japanese work it beats any other works because atleast the characters had families

why the hell are u destroying your own great story ? u gave eternal youth so stick them together until end don't change in the middle. want someone else just add that person.because the way u do it right now looks stupid and not professional like it was in the beginning