Comments of chapter undefined of World Domination System
World Domination System
KillerHemboy
Chapter comments221
This is because traces of high-quality Ether had been detected on the thieves at the time that they interacted with host. This was not detected before due to the absence of the module.] (Do not see the logic) It's like a hero met a thief and killed him. A year later he found a device detecting eavesdropping bugs. And with the help of it discovered that the thief whom he killed a year ago (and whose corpse had already floated down the river) had on himself a listening bug... Although the situation in the chapter is even more implausible. The author is too lazy to explain the situation, I will prompt a variant. (Ether had been detected on the map left after the thieves) But this will have consequences. Ether trace will remain on things for months and this should be taken into account in the future plot. And do not conflict with the previous explanation about the absorption by the land of used ether.
My review on this chapter; The idea and explanation of mageroot is fine. The explanation of how the system is somehow able to detect ether on long captured criminals is completely off. It couldn't then and even if it can now, it shouldn't be able to unless they are present. This makes it like a convenient plot for him to actually remember visiting the treasure spot.
two questions 1. Why during the 6 days after the system developed the PM and he found out about the hidden injuries dud he not use the updated ether intake to heal them? 2. When is he going to go to the Palace to receive his reward for becoming the Prime Citizen, he was supposed to go the next day, which he did not, unless the author forgot to mention that he had done so.
