Anone
How do I say this in the upmost respectful way? Can we have the MC not mention how hot a woman is for one chapter? Possible? Book was fire when it was the two gnomes and the old man, but now its "OMG she is so hot!" even during a serious situation. That breaks the tension, makes the MC look weak, and annoys. Please don't take this comment personally. I'm really rooting for you.
Why does the MC keep doing stupid things? I'm really trying to like this novel since I find the plot interesting but the MC, despite knowing how careful he should be, keeps fucking up on the most basic things. Seriously a ****** thing like "only weave in the presence of those who already know I can weave" should have been blatantly obvious. Yet it seems like it somehow wasn't, or he wasn't paying attention and I honestly don't know what's worse given how bad his situation is...
Iâm tired of these negative comments Kael is supposed to know but he doesnât really know anything heâs a blank slate. If he had his memories he would have a reason to be sure not to cross any lines but he doesnât so he tried his best to do whatâs asked but when that doesnât work heâs like well I hope nothing seriously bad will happen