ThunderSurfer
Good idea, less then ideal execution, "good guys vs bad guys" dumb and greedy ppl in power vs "SUPER SMART" mc, whos going to turn it all around useing only he's wits of 20 year old..? Mhm.. Im willing to give this story a benefit of the doubght, but its really hard not to laugh at some parts, for example - "His face wasn't the kind that let you feel comfortable, and his eyes spoke of something being schemed." K so here's our 1st bad guy to defeat, Not a host of soldiers to keep an eye on the young noble, but a minister.... awesome.