Comments of chapter undefined of Divine Emperor of Death
Divine Emperor of Death
Stardust_Breaker
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not going to lie. at this point, if the plan is to just force nora into Logan's harem, I hope you just kill her off. her character actually seems decent whereas Logan's character has pretty much been garbage since the early part of the story and the only reason to keep him around is because you'd feel bad for claire. overall your story is pretty decent. the biggest issue is the main character's maturity. he is damning people for something he himself is doing right after he realized that he was making a mistake. preferably you would have claire choosing a third option that would actually show character growth for her and davis.
Though again the above is merely me expressing my thoughts. I know Nora has been earmarked for Logan's harem since before she said she liked him. She practically waved to the readers and said "Hello I am a plot device to make Logan stronger." (with their whole complimentary elementals) That had temporarily slipped my mind. I guess I just really don't like Logan as a character and feel all the time spent on developing Nora as a character is a waste just to add something to him. /shrug I understand the effort to develop Claire as she is his mother, Nora's characterization just feels like a waste to be relegated to a side character's harem, though I know a lot of that is just this author's style with all the previous ones, as a form of minor detail to flesh out the story.
Zanzabar:Well we’re having a conversation so if i seem overly aggressive i apologize. i do wholeheartly disagree with you but you are entitled to your opinion
why suddenly Davis become a scum that suggest to her mother who loved her monogamous happy marriage life with her husband to let her husband have another wife ( those 8 concubine doesn't count as they had his children ) .... why Davis becoming like this? just because they were like a sister they should become the wife of the same man ? even though Logan swear his undying love for only for Claire ? why all this forced drama? clearly other readers pointed it out too...... their 3rd option is to leave her alone and forget her and Davis after such a looooooong time use his real power to easily solvetheproblem(death power, honestly I started to forget about the name of this story and MC real power) , is it too much to ask that we want to see him be a little bit dominant instead of being a scheming fox and play political games in this cultivation world
