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Comments of chapter undefined of Divine Emperor of Death

dfektz
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not going to lie. at this point, if the plan is to just force nora into Logan's harem, I hope you just kill her off. her character actually seems decent whereas Logan's character has pretty much been garbage since the early part of the story and the only reason to keep him around is because you'd feel bad for claire. overall your story is pretty decent. the biggest issue is the main character's maturity. he is damning people for something he himself is doing right after he realized that he was making a mistake. preferably you would have claire choosing a third option that would actually show character growth for her and davis.

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dfektz
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I don't mind, I'm not saying that the author should listen to my opinion or anything, this is my first post since I have been binging the story and there are several times when Davis's character is overly frustrating because his actions or thought process breaks my suspension of disbelief. In this case, he (and Claire) literally just found out that they were misguided in pursuing her revenge, to me, the next logical step would be that maybe our targets are wrong and we should investigate to make sure we don't wrong another incident as obviously, Nora's family is not so amazing that they can't be framed. So yeah, from the previous two thoughts, obviously just a struggle with the suspension of disbelief for myself. Also for me, it is one thing for a character to be ruthless to enemies, but people struggle at compartmentalizing their behaviors so if they are completely indifferent or cruel to innocents then that will most likely slowly bleed over into how you how they treat those close to them. Also for the reasoning behind it feeling forced, while Nora has expressed feelings for Logan, Logan has his oath (that is pretty hardline that he won't take anyone else - not like Davis who said he would do it with consent). In addition to that, Claire has her own hangup with already being in a relatively sizeable harem (sure, small for imperial standards, but not the relationship she was expecting). I could understand the, "I feel guilty for mistreating Nora since she was innocent." However, to follow that plan, you are either expecting Nora to suffer with her family being killed off or for a long, winding road in which Logan breaks his oath per the plan would require and convincing Claire to spare Nora's family which would be a betrayal of her emotions until Claire just rolls over because she is hopelessly in love with Logan. (I'll admit I was that the whole Claire coming around to the harem with Davis's plan was another thing that just shattered suspension of disbelief for me.) This could very well be flawed reasoning because I don't know how the author will handle the situation, all reasoning is flawed when not all the details are known. (Also as a joking aside, technically all the relationships are "forced" in the sense that it is a work of fiction and the author controls the fates of the characters/relationships :) )

Zanzabar:Well we’re having a conversation so if i seem overly aggressive i apologize. i do wholeheartly disagree with you but you are entitled to your opinion
Fhd
FhdLv11Fhd

the wise things to do is drop him in the palace and forget about him till the rest of the story

MJAgo
MJAgoLv14MJAgo

why suddenly Davis become a scum that suggest to her mother who loved her monogamous happy marriage life with her husband to let her husband have another wife ( those 8 concubine doesn't count as they had his children ) .... why Davis becoming like this? just because they were like a sister they should become the wife of the same man ? even though Logan swear his undying love for only for Claire ? why all this forced drama? clearly other readers pointed it out too...... their 3rd option is to leave her alone and forget her and Davis after such a looooooong time use his real power to easily solvetheproblem(death power, honestly I started to forget about the name of this story and MC real power) , is it too much to ask that we want to see him be a little bit dominant instead of being a scheming fox and play political games in this cultivation world

zeraf
zerafLv6zeraf

Thanks for the chapter

FunnyBuns
FunnyBunsLv15FunnyBuns

Day 3 and Isabella still hasn't paid for the crime of betrayal.