Comments of chapter undefined of Divine Emperor of Death
Divine Emperor of Death
Stardust_Breaker
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not going to lie. at this point, if the plan is to just force nora into Logan's harem, I hope you just kill her off. her character actually seems decent whereas Logan's character has pretty much been garbage since the early part of the story and the only reason to keep him around is because you'd feel bad for claire. overall your story is pretty decent. the biggest issue is the main character's maturity. he is damning people for something he himself is doing right after he realized that he was making a mistake. preferably you would have claire choosing a third option that would actually show character growth for her and davis.
it is forced because it would involve claire deciding to allow Logan to take another woman. and while yes there was like one sentence of her realizing that a harem might not be so bad seeing the harmony of her davis' harem. logan has consistently shown an inability to balance that. not to mention how inconsistent claire has been for her revenge with her willing to just return home and happily be with her children. also pointing out that he is a hypocrite does not showed flawed reasoning. I said that he lacks maturity because he does as he constantly is noticing that his disposition is changing and is worried he will become cruel to even those he cares about. his plans for claire are both damaging to her as now she feels guilty about hurting an innocent nora, instead of trying to guide her family toward a lesser punishment and a potentially amicable ending with the true perpetrators being killed with little consequences. the first plan is to literally make nora love logan more than her own family after knowing the former for less than three months and thinking she wouldn't be against her family dying. however everything I typed was an opinion. so dont really know why i am trying to justify it.
Zanzabar:How is it a force if nora has already been shown to want logan? Also furthermore that is showing that davis is a human and futhermore He openly admits that he’s a hypocrite. your reasoning is flawwed. also i will admit that logan hasnt had any real growth but i think this potential arc is a great opportunity for him to grow.
why suddenly Davis become a scum that suggest to her mother who loved her monogamous happy marriage life with her husband to let her husband have another wife ( those 8 concubine doesn't count as they had his children ) .... why Davis becoming like this? just because they were like a sister they should become the wife of the same man ? even though Logan swear his undying love for only for Claire ? why all this forced drama? clearly other readers pointed it out too...... their 3rd option is to leave her alone and forget her and Davis after such a looooooong time use his real power to easily solvetheproblem(death power, honestly I started to forget about the name of this story and MC real power) , is it too much to ask that we want to see him be a little bit dominant instead of being a scheming fox and play political games in this cultivation world
