Comments of chapter undefined of Dragonborn Saga

You know... This novel just straight up ruined Skyrim the game. The novel its just so much better than the original, my god. Also, you never see npcs the same way. I saw lisette in the winking skeever the other day and it was just WEIRD.

I'm serious Don, Bethesda needs to give this a good read on how to PROPERLY write a story.

Jon took the law of the Empire rolled it up an fu**ed General Tullius his plans and Legion in the a** . And the best is it´s completely legal .

You know what I most love about this fan-fic it's Jon's personality

Jon has created The Dare Law Firm were he will help get u the innocent verdict even if ur guilty n theirs evidence

lawyers are the devilest of the deviles

Always nice seeing a new chapter. It raises my spirits immediately. The only thing that is worse than a devil. A lawyer. Or is it that the devil is a lawyer, hard to say? P. S. Don have you moved earliest NSFW parts to another novel or is it still in this one. I just recommended this novel to someone, but I forgot and am now worried about those parts.

Now, when I play the game, I almost feel bored...or rather disappointed? It almost feels like this story is canon and the game just a summary/simplification of it.

Lawyers do not lie, they use the law and the way it is written. It might not be just, it's still legal. I love how Jon use the law of the Empire against them.

Jon should have people all over Tamriel gossiping about how foolish Tullius is and ruin his career..."I'm about to end this man's whole career"

Jon Dare can be a little tough at times, you may not know it, but Jon Dare also grew up without parents. In fact, he never met any of his parents, and he never had any friends in our village. Even so I never saw him cry, get angry or give up, he is always willing to improve, he will be the Dragonborn, it is his dream and Jon Dare would give his life for it without hesitation. My guess is that he got tired of crying and decided to do something about it!

Completely unrelated but now I'm betting the D. in One Piece is Dare. Just saying.

Jon's just a lawyer the same way as Walter 'Heisenberg' White was just a high school chemistry teacher.

👿 It's already finished.... I need MOAR!! THE POWER OF ***** COMPELS YOU!!

"What are you?" "Me, I am just a LAWYER."

Jon did more than kill cheat and **** his way up. He fucking thummed in everyone's ass

That why i hate lawyers with theirs big ass mouth

Why did it end so fast, that was a good chapter. Thanks for the chapter.

Thanks for the chapter.

Danke for the chapter 😊 also you missed a golden opportunity to be the number one fanfic brother Don if you had just released a few more chappies! As one of your Patreons I wouldn't have minded you releasing some of the ahead chapters so you could finally claim your rightful place as no.1 fanfic 👍 nevermind yoh are still the best fanfic in my heart ♥ also just realized that the displaced no.1 novel is actually full of dirty dog worshippers! 🤨