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GrayTree5dReplied to SolqrzYes, but afetrwards, smeling burned flesh and seeing spilled guts and blood, the stomach of a modern man will turn. He cannot stay unafected by such things, especially someone who lived his whole life in an apartment.
Warm blood dripped on his skin as he pressed his fingers on the throat of the struggling creatures.- GrayTree9dReplied to Hungry_Hugo
Thats not what I mean exactly. I'm refering to a sense of disguist and guilt of taking a life. While you can somewhat control the latter, you will find something disguisting as long as you don't get used to it. To jump from a modern life to blood, guts and burned flesh without a reaction isn't something a human can achive.
Warm blood dripped on his skin as he pressed his fingers on the throat of the struggling creatures. - GrayTree10dCommented
Infamous?
The big one and small one were straight-up plagiarised from the infamous cartoon, 'Tom & Jerry.' - GrayTree11dCommented
It's in the description NO PLOT ARMOUR, in other words caracters die meaninglessly.
So, everyone looked forward to the clash, for until now, whenever the Main Character came faced with such situations, he used his wit and ingenuity to realistically survive the crisis. But faced with such hype, the author decided to kill the Main Character. - GrayTree11dCommented
Plot armour is an aspect of a story and as such is unavoidable yoi can just affect how seen it is. So cheats and system have nothing to do with plot armour. But don't get me wrong cheats and systerm are huge red flags for me as a reader.
Hence, it received a large fan following from people that were fed up with stories about Main Characters with gold fingers, cheats, Systems, etc. - GrayTree30dCommented
I think Adonis is the best written character here. You can tell that something is up with him. Alicia and Billy are wierd, both make little sense. Alicia is just plain dumb, and Billy is admonished for the least negative things he did. Like what is going on?
As a result, Adonis, Billy, and Alicia became the sort of faces of the Alpha Class, and as for the Beta Squad, there were three major cliques. - GrayTree30dCommented
I don't remember seeing the EDGY tag on the novel
'But this is the second time you've crossed me now. I'll have to ensure there isn't a third.' - GrayTree30dReplied to atamix
What's yours is mine and what's mine is mine.
'But this is the second time you've crossed me now. I'll have to ensure there isn't a third.' - GrayTree30dCommented
I reallllllllly hope the dialoge gets better down the line.
"Tch! What is this? Is it revenge because I'm no longer friends with you or anything like that? You brought it upon yourself." - GrayTree30dCommented
Betraying a friendship means the bro code is no longer in effect. Sorry buddy.
"You… why are you doing this, huh? You clearly know how I feel about her!" - GrayTree30dCommented
I mean he let you go so i don't umderstand what you are saying right now. He's a bad because he wants to be a better person for a girl, what?
Rey already knew his friend was an asshole, since he abandoned him, but he never thought he would be this far gone. - GrayTree1mthCommented
They died in thheit original world, so do her actions mean she would rather be dead than here? If so, why doesn't she just off herselfe?
'Maybe I can find a way to return home. I… I want to leave this world already.' - GrayTree1mthCommented
I was wondering about that.
'Yet here I am, completely alone, yet I'm not losing my shit…' - GrayTree1mthCommented
Of course he doesn't feel anything when killing another living being. It's not as if he is just a normal teenager.
Warm blood dripped on his skin as he pressed his fingers on the throat of the struggling creatures. - GrayTree1mthCommented
Nooo! Bring back my boy! And what were thoes powers at the end, I need to know.
"I don't know what happened!" Jon replied with a tired face, "Failsafe is supposed to be wiped clean to prevent any Apocryphal influence from getting to my head." - GrayTree2mthCommented
You say that as if it's a bad thing. But I do agree with yoir decision. No need to spoil a good construct by forcing change at the end.
This piece of lore was added in some recent trailer for a DLC in ESO and I am not that keen on adding any aspect of it to the story here since I am finalizing it all in my roadmap with no room for expansion. As for my personal opinion, the names Itheila and Mirrormoor scream Tolkin fan in my head. - GrayTree2mthReplied to GrayTree
Apologies for the cringe induced, I felt poetic
And since I finally started sleeping properly in the past month, I got my Masters and worked as a screenwriter for a local entertainment show, and yeah… I AM A DAD! - GrayTree3mthCommented
These Lanist... I mean, tentecle creatures!
"Hermaeus Mora sends his regards!" - GrayTree3mthCommented
Congradulations! 🍾I wish you many wonderful celebrations,to her many happy years,And may you all spill only of happiness born tears. Now don't drink too many beers, let loose many cheares. Don't forget to kiss yoir wife, for if she's happy so will be your life. GT
And since I finally started sleeping properly in the past month, I got my Masters and worked as a screenwriter for a local entertainment show, and yeah… I AM A DAD! - GrayTree3mthCommented
Bearing Deadra with Deadric strategy. Simply briliant
"Operation Hijack Twilight, commencing the second phase!" Jon called all his minions and then looked up, "Xikil, start up the Dread Engine. Today, the Dark Anchors shall hit Apocrypha!"