Comments of chapter undefined of The Mech Touch

Ves doesn’t like it when he doesn’t have options. Someone did there homework to get Ves in bed, but not keep him in bed.

I wanted Ves to join the war before this chapter. Now I want him to avoid it out of spite…

I understand Ves enough to see why he is uncomfortable, but in the end: what is the harm? 1. Melee expert pilots can excercise their power, other than fighting Phase Lords they are not that good against aliens unless they become ace pilots. 2. The Larkinsons can make sure Davute wins and thus protect their interests. 3. Getting a bigger say in Davute by contributing to the war effort will also secure the Davute branch's position.

Just flip the table over instead of getting screwed over!

Clive slowly squeezing Ves into a corner:

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Come on devil tongue

its quite easy the Cross clan and the larkinson familiy Fight for davute and the others can go on the Expedition

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These people think they got Ves, lol 😂 let's see who got who at the end!!

Ves is truly stupid, he already learned in advance from the black cats that they are roping them in. He should have pried into that matter but he let them be. Lol

I knew this will come up during the negotiation, but to be fair as the readers we are not subjected to Ves and the characters inside their own fog of war. It’s impossible for a person to know everything, in reality no one is omnipotent and leaders could be led astray by the flawed intelligence they are presented with. The latest war in Europe is an example of this, when the decision to invade was made because red carpets and flowers were expected to be thrown at the invaders rather than carpet like blood field and molotovs. Don’t expect the person who gives this intelligence and their family members to be still alive. Instead the best that they can hope is to have a swift and quick death. Back to the story. If the chapter where the davute makes the offer to Arc did not exist, then the readers would definitely be shocked and generate more of readers sense of drama at the end of this chapter. While this approach may not appeal to all readers, and more likely to generate mixed response. I feel that if the chapter with arc dialogue with Davute is presented after this chapter as a flashback, it would have been as enjoyable as drinking cold coke after choking on a unexpectedly delicious French fries. In fact the order of the chapter could be reorganized this way at anytime, without any editing needing to be made, and it will not disrupt the order of the story and future planning.