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(Re-writing)In Marvel; I'm a Cartoonist

(Original book's author= Renz_Udquin https://www.webnovel.com/profile/4314967471?appId=10) (Link to original: https://www.webnovel.com/book/marvel-i’m-a-cartoonist_21694636805049605) I found this story that was very long, but had been very poorly written. I decide that to improve my own writing skills I will now go through the original book and do my best to re-write it. (Please be aware that cringe is expected) Original book synopsis below; Hulk: Hulk is invincible! Saitama: Can you let me? I’m going to the supermarket to buy specials. Thanos: I see, I conquer! Lord Boros: The duel between the overlords, I have been looking forward to it for a long time! Devourer: Earth, I’ll eat it. Kakarot: Can’t you eat something else? Batman: I want to get rid of the Gotham Gang. JOJO: Today I want to become a gangster star here! General Zod: Krypton will return to its glory on the earth! Six Path Naruto: Dude, this is your relative. Clark: . . .

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Chapter 6-Peter and Harry

Location: A high school in Queens, New York.

In the scorching summer, sweaty students walked out of the school gate in groups, greeting each other laughingly.

A high-end silver-gray car was parked at the entrance of the college, and the students passing by all showed envy.

They know whose car it was.

"Peter, go to my house and sit down?"

Two people walking together came out of the door.

"No, Harry, I have to go back."-Peter Parker waved his hand and paused, "I'm going to the research institute tomorrow. There are so many scientific discoveries that are really exciting."

Peter Parker, a nerd, is very interested in some scientific research. He thinks it is because he was deeply influenced by his parents when he was young.

"Ah Well, then forget it."-Harry Osborn caught a glimpse of the red-haired girl, whose graceful and bold figure stimulated the hormones around her. She was Mary Jane. Harry dealt with it casually, placing his heart on the woman.

"Hey, Harry, look that's Lucien."-When Peter was about to go back, he found the young man in casual clothes, beckoning and shouting on a whim.

Although Lucien was one grade higher than them and is now a college student, the three of them are very good friends.

Lucien approached and said with a smile: "You two are really younger than me now."

"Huh, Lucien are you fine, and the sorrows haven't changed you so smoothly." Harry still slapped Lucien's shoulder with his fist, making Peter smile knowingly.

They knew soon after Lucien's parents were in the air crash. They hadn't seen him for a whole week and now they saw that he were full of energy, and their spirited attitude as friends also fell to their hearts.

Lucien heard the words and said thoughtfully: "I'm afraid Grand Prince Harry thinks he is a beautiful woman."

He glanced at Mary, which made Harry a little embarrassed.

The introverted Peter actually liked Mary Jane and didn't dare to speak out. Lucien saw it all. To be honest, Mary was not suitable for Peter.

Lucien took Gali out for a meal near the evening and let her go back on his own, while he came to the previous high school.

Peter asked, "Why are you back?"

After Lucien explained, it became clear why.

Lucien studied at Queens University before, and now his house and company are in Manhattan, so he came to do the transfer procedures this time, just passing high school.

Harry asked, "I heard that you inherited a comic company? This is not a good business."

Harry, as the eldest son of the Osborn family and the future head of Oscorps, is now initially involved in group affairs.

The comic industry is becoming increasingly stable, and it is well known that the lack of vitality and competitiveness is like a stagnant pool.

"It's hard to say, I will release my own comics tomorrow, wait and see."

The three chatted at the school gate for a while, and Peter and Harry were surprised that Lucien even knew how to draw comics and both said they would buy it in support.

At sunset, the setting sun gradually faded to the horizon.

Lucien walked slowly towards the residence but found the girl in the purple dress squatting outside the restaurant. Her face suddenly turned black, and she walked over and squeezed it directly.

"Oh."-Gali was drooling over the food in the restaurant, but was directly picked up by someone. She immediately turned her head and flashed purple light, trying to kill the disrespectful person directly.

Unexpectedly, seeing a gloomy face, Gali's purple light suddenly dissipated, her blinking eyes were full of tears, and she started to cry: "Lucien, I was so hungry, I had to run out."

Lucien was unmoved when he heard the words, and sneered: "Hungry? You just ate two servings at four and are still hungry. It's not six o'clock now. Are you a pig?"

"I'm not a pig! I'm not even a low-level creature."-As soon as Gali heard it, her hair was blown up, and the dead duck's mouth screamed: "Don't believe it, listen to it!"

"Listen to what…"-Lucien didn't believe it at all, hehe was talking, and at this moment, the sound of "cockoo" came from Gali's belly.

"You really are a pig."

"I am not, this is normal!"

"Why would I not, no one else would, why would you?"

"Who said that, so will my father."

"Well, you father and daughter are both."

"Hmph, I hope you won't pee your pants when he comes."

"Hey."

Lucien and Gali were arguing outside the restaurant, completely uncomfortable. Her father had died a long time ago and turned into a ghost to come to him. When Gali saw this, she didn't use force to convince Lucien to roll around all over her to get something to eat.

'Got it, take it back to an uncle.'

Lucien thought that Gali was a good girl at first. He didn't expect to be so naughty. She could make things out of her meals. Five meals a day, 3 servings per meal.

He directly carried Gali, who was like a hamster, and squeezed his round fleshy face for a while before taking Gali into the restaurant.

Fortunately, he is rich.

One hour later, Gali followed Lucien dejectedly and went out to the restaurant, muttering to herself: "I'm not full."

Lucien walked in front and listened to Gali's dissatisfaction without saying a word, secretly said: 'She can really eat, is Gali sick?'

Lucien believed that no one in the marvel with such a stomach had ever existed.

*Bang! bang! bang!*

Suddenly, continuous violent gunfire exploded.

Hearing the sound, Lucien shuddered and focused his hearing to find out that it came from a small alley not far away. At the same time, accompanied by a dazzling fire snake spouting from the muzzle, it suddenly broke the original comfortable atmosphere.

He directly grabbed Gali's wrist and strode towards home. As an ordinary person, he didn't want to take a peek because of curiosity at this time. This was just killing him.

As long as the comics are published tomorrow, everything will change.

Not long after Lucien left, the gunfire gradually stopped, and the alleys at dusk were filled with the pungent smell of gunpowder smoke, with large and small bullet craters all around.

A girl with purple hair, in tights and short skirts emerged from the darkness, with a black mask covering her face, and whispered: "Big old man, it seems someone has found it."

"It's okay, he is very smart."-The middle-aged man in black uniform was groping on the body of the gangster and sneered without turning his head.

After rummaging for a while, he didn't find the big old man he wanted and became angry and swearing.

"Frank, this damn fellow does nothing, Schitt, the clue is broken again."

At this moment, the sirens sounded, and the two hurriedly vanished the traces and turned into ghosts in the dark, disappearing into the shadows.

Sorry for the late chapter.

My school work had piled up so big that it spilled off my desk......

Any way hope everyone enjoys

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