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(Re-writing)In Marvel; I'm a Cartoonist

(Original book's author= Renz_Udquin https://www.webnovel.com/profile/4314967471?appId=10) (Link to original: https://www.webnovel.com/book/marvel-i’m-a-cartoonist_21694636805049605) I found this story that was very long, but had been very poorly written. I decide that to improve my own writing skills I will now go through the original book and do my best to re-write it. (Please be aware that cringe is expected) Original book synopsis below; Hulk: Hulk is invincible! Saitama: Can you let me? I’m going to the supermarket to buy specials. Thanos: I see, I conquer! Lord Boros: The duel between the overlords, I have been looking forward to it for a long time! Devourer: Earth, I’ll eat it. Kakarot: Can’t you eat something else? Batman: I want to get rid of the Gotham Gang. JOJO: Today I want to become a gangster star here! General Zod: Krypton will return to its glory on the earth! Six Path Naruto: Dude, this is your relative. Clark: . . .

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Chapter 3- Shounen jump, Marvel comics

Even though Andy was still interested in the comic, he screamed in his heart. Glancing sat Lucien not sure of what to say.

Isn't Saitama's lack of muscles not really worth seeing?

And obviously Saitama's casual words stimulated vaccine man's self-esteem, or in other words he also got angry.

The Vaccine Man became huge in his anger that he had undoubtedly become even more powerful than before, and Andy felt that this bald man would die on the spot.

The difference in body shape between the two sides is huge, and the aura is even more incomparable. Seeing Saitama's expression like a hair dryer, Andy can't help but touch his forehead.

Was this a dark hero comic.

This was a fairly new comic idea in the marvel world. The protagonist would be abused throughout the whole process, his girlfriend is dead, and even a criminal can be beaten for a quarter.

Such novel ideas were sought after at first, but readers couldn't stand it when they followed suit, and the mentality exploded directly.

There was no expectation for the plot, and Andy, who could only say barely any good words after reading it, turned to the next page.

"Well, it really is like this....... huh?!!!"

After seeing the picture depicted on the next page, Andy's body suddenly shook, the goose bumps were all up, and his eyeballs almost flew out of their eye sockets.

Andy muttered to himself: "I must have missed it."

Turning the comic back one page, he quickly flipped back and forth in a daze.

The result was basically the same. The brows were frowning. Andy looked at Lucien and asked softly, "Did you drop a few pages?"

Lucien looked at his Uncle Andy's dazed look, and couldn't help but rejoice in amusement.

"Not a single page has been dropped. That's it."

"Oh my god."-Andy cried out.

After getting the answer that wasn't what he had expected. Andy caught the attention of the employees outside the door with a violent yell, and read the last words in a mess.

In a daze, he gently put down the draft of Chapter 4, as if fearing that the paper would be destroyed, he couldn't help swallowing, and asked, "What is the name of the comic?"

Obviously, this comic directly overturns the traditional definition of a hero. The protagonist is not a saint, nor does it have a Superpower, and the Three Views are not a heroic concept, just as it says.

It's just interest of the hero.

This is the first time he has been so fascinated as a manager and editor in many years.

This was Absolutely fire!

The previous 'Vaccine Man' may have people thinking that it was the same as the incredible hulk. But in fact, the Crab-man in the second chapter has already made it clear. In fact, these settings are full of insinuations to traditional criminals.

The villain's nonsense is actually useless. Saitama punched him to death. The contrast was big enough to attract eyeballs.

There is no logic at all, and the settings are messy. It's completely random to think about, but it was beautiful so readers can't stop.

In addition, these exquisite original paintings are completely the highest level of painting skills in the United States. It is conceivable that the manga market that has begun to decline will definitely rebound because of this.

Lucien spread his hands and said lightly, "One Punch Man."

"One punch, it fits this cartoon." Andy once again picked up the drawing and flipped it from time to time, clearly admiring Lucien's work.

"This is a very amazing comic."

"So it'll do it."

Andy heard Lucien's words and said worriedly: "Even so, the company can't be supported by only one comic, you won't have enough energy."

This is the truth. It is impossible for a company to make money from a cartoonist at all. If it were not for the Great Depression, I am afraid that more cartoonists would join the market today.

"Be at ease, Uncle Andy, I have many more ideas that are as wonderful as this cartoon here." Lucien pointed to his head and believed in himself.

If there is no system, the comics he recalled were really limited, and even with the search function, I am afraid that he will never finish painting in his life.

"Well then, you are the boss anyway."-Andy sighed helplessly. Although he was a friend of Lucien's father, he did not actually have any shares and there fore could only make suggestions. But still Andy was still a little worried.

Lucien shook his head secretly when he saw this. He knew what he was thinking, and the facts can only be witnessed in the future. What he said now is futile.

After a pause, he starting thinking about something.

"Rename our original magazine to: 'Shounen Jump'. From now on, all my comics will be placed on it."

Shonen Jump is the highest-circulation shonen manga magazine published by Shueisha in the previous life. It serializes countless well-known classics.

For example: One Piece, Dragon Ball, Naruto, Bleach, Hunter x Hunter, and so on, these Lucien planed to make one by one.

After listening to Lucien. Andy said clearly to him: "Shounen jump? The comic copyright of the resigned cartoonist is still in my hands, what do you think we should do? Should I ask someone else to continue this drawing?"

After a signed cartoonist resigns, the comics that they make will be in the hands of the original company. Unless it is a big-name cartoonist, renewal is also the practice of most companies.

"No, don't continue painting. The key to Junior Jump is friendship, hard work, and victory. The traditional superhero theme has been solidified and it is no longer necessary."-Lucien began to analyse, and directly put the cartoons of several people into the trash can.

I'm positive that if they knew they will vomit blood.

Andy understood and nodded. Through a short time of understanding, he has found that Lucien has been able to stand alone. His words are reasonable, and his behaviour is even more vigorous. Though he is not as humble as his father's traditional Chinese people. No doubt Lucien is better for the company.

Then Andy and Lucien started planning for the future in the office, and even discussed the idea of ​​animation. Both of them are full of confidence in One Punch Man.

On the journey of animation, the existing manpower is obviously not enough to start hiring people after the success of the new comics. Both want to do animation by themselves, and it is undoubtedly more profitable to produce and sell themselves.

In fact, if Lucien is in the ordinary world, he can stay steadily in a hurry, but now he knows in Marvel Universe whether the villain will run out early, or if he walks on the street, he will be killed by a sudden arrow.

He is just an ordinary person.

He never wanted to pin his hopes on others. The sooner the fan value arrives, the safer he feels, so he decided to plan the future with Uncle Andy.

Time waits for no one.

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Outside the office

"What do you say the boss and the editor-in-chief said? Isn't it going to be bankrupt?"

"Let it go."

"It's not easy to find this job."

The employees are whispering, and they are a little uneasy about the future.

They are not cartoonists in this period of economic depression and crisis, bankruptcy means they are unemployed, and no company will hire them.

Just as they were confused, with a "crunch", The two men walked out of the office, and it was Andy who spoke first.

The veteran he was started to calm the anxiety of the employees in a few words, and even raised the manuscript to prove that there were still people submitting it.

Andy did not say that the author of the drawing was the boss, otherwise they would be even more irritable.

"Boss....no, Lucien, I'll call you your name. Don't forget to go to school. That university is very rich."-Andy took Lucien to the elevator. He was saying meaningful words and patted Lucien on the shoulder.

*Ding.*

Lucien's face turned dark hearing the rumbling of his uncle. He walked into the elevator, but his mind flashed before the doors closed.

"By the way, Uncle Andy, the company name has also changed."-Lucien said calmly with interest.

"What?"-Andy didn't expect this to happen, and asked in confusion.

The name Tengman was named after Lucien's father, and it has a strong oriental fate.

"We are now 'Marvel-Comics.'"

As soon as Lucien's voice fell, the elevator closed the door and slowly descended.

Only Andy was left in a daze.

"Marvel Comics."

This is Western nomenclature.

But Andy always felt that there was a deeper meaning behind Lucien's words.

Hope everyone enjoys.....

If I mange to I'll post the next later tonight.

Or very earlier tomorrow

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